SPN Fanfic--On My Knees: Epilogue (Dean/Sam)

[kaynara]

Comments

Re: Oh my god.

[velvetmagras]

Do me a favour and take the "This is my first SPN fanfic." off because it totally distracts from the awsomeness of this pretty fab piece of writing. The OC was wonderful (not nauseatingly sweet and/or evil). The boy's characterisations were pretty spot on for me, and, best of all, there was plot! Wonderful well-written plot! My one critique would be more Bobby, really, there can never be too much Bobby. In fact this pretty much my favourite bit most heartwarming bit;

“Dean and I aren’t sure where we’ll end up yet. But we’d like to come by now and then.” Sam shrugged and offered a smile. “I want her to have a Bobby.”

Bobby paused, face pink and coffee mug halted halfway to his lips.

“I, uh. Need to take a leak,” he muttered before walking out of the room.

Lovely, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Re: Oh my god.

[kaynara]

Aw, thanks. I too love Bobby. :)

Re: Oh my god.

[anonymous]

Wow. Thanks so much! And I'm honored that I got you to read Wincest. ;)

[acostilow]

This was incredible. Very good. Very, very good.

[kaynara]

Thanks for reading!

[gidgetgal9]

This is so wonderful- couldn't stop reading it! Knowing it was your first time to write SPN fan fiction blows me away! You've got a wonderful writing style and have the boys pegged. Loved all your characters. Can't wait to read your next story!

[kaynara]

Thanks for the compliment!

[ahora_11]

First SPN fic? you freakin kidding right? THIS WAS MADE OF FUCKIN GOLD! IT WAS AWESOME! AND YOU HAD THE BOYS PERSONALITIES/VOICES HEAD ON! ok im done with the caplocks but seriously it was an awsome read...and really? i want some more SPN stories out of you! :D

[kaynara]

Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it!

[jacey26]

OMG this was so great! I just spent the whole evening reading the whole thing thru and loved every minute of it. Thank you so much:)

[kaynara]

Thanks for reading!