Comments | kaymickbee: Pieces of Me Falling, ch.18/20

kaymickbee

Pieces of Me Falling, ch.18/20

Feb 02, 2005 13:56

Because your feedback really is a motivating force, I present one of the final chapters. I am writing 20 now, and it should end there. I hope to have everything posted by the end of next week. Really, this last batch of comments has done wonders for my self-esteem. Thank you for taking the time to respond.

( Sometimes, flattery gets you everywhere :) )

fanfiction by me

Comments 13

aheiden February 2 2005, 19:58:01 UTC

More! More! More! You have to fix things between them! Pretty please!!!!

kaymickbee February 2 2005, 21:38:27 UTC

Patience, grasshopper! :)

aheiden February 2 2005, 21:40:58 UTC

*grumbles* Patience is overrated.....

moonmaker February 2 2005, 21:34:59 UTC

That can so NOT be the end!

kaymickbee February 2 2005, 21:38:00 UTC

Hee! It's not. I have at least 2 chapters to go. Possibly a happy ending, but who knows... ?

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

lawyergirl15 February 3 2005, 00:24:44 UTC

You're killing me! Absolutely killing me. Another great chapter. Thank you so much for throwing it up so quickly (wow, that sounds bad once I typed it).

I liked the spell. It made sense in light of the joining spell. Good job!

Okay, seriously, you need to get these two together, you can't leave me with this tense uncomfortable feeling. I read the two of them being awkward and hesitant and I get all "itchy." Strict orders for you to fix it missy!

catzen20 February 3 2005, 16:56:51 UTC

It's not nice to let people like that ::pout::

I enjoy a lot reading it...and More Please...*g*

::hugs::

kaymickbee February 3 2005, 18:02:38 UTC

I am trying, seriously, to go as FAST as I can. I kind of want it to be over too. Well, sort of. I will be sad when this story is over.

Thanks and hugs back...

beadattitude February 3 2005, 17:16:16 UTC

ARRRRRGH! No no no no no no no no. You have to fix it. Please.

:::holds up dolls of Buffy and Giles and mushes their heads together so they kiss:: See? Like this.

::whimpers::

kaymickbee February 3 2005, 18:01:35 UTC

Hee! You make me laugh. I have such a problem writing happiness. It always sounds cheesy to me when I write it. I think I will just have to kill them both off.

... "and they were both run over by a truck."

THE END

;)

editcat February 3 2005, 21:26:12 UTC

No, no...it's, 'And they fell down the well and drowned.' Mark Twain reported that he almost resorted to it...only he was afraid the well would fill up.