Afternoon Delight

[kaylynnkie]

Title: Afternoon Delight

Author: kaylynnkie

Rating: R (language)

Word Count: 2176

Pairing: Jared/Jensen

Summary: A sequel to jaenivitechia  's CW Center. After his punishment, Jared cares for Jensen and they discuss what it means to be a good citizen.

Warning: Discussion of whipping and strapping.

Disclaimer: Not mine. No disrespect meant.

Comments

[on_a_halfshell]

Sweet! I was so excited to see this. I love the world you have created here. I can't wait for more.

[kaylynnkie]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I def owe jaenivitechia major props for starting this in the first place. We'll see how the original creator likes it before I go writing more, but I'd love to continue.

[jaenivitechia]

I love where you went with this. I'm glad you wrote from Jared's POV. It was harder for me to see where he was coming from when I was writing "CW Center". I like how you wrote him. It makes sense with his actions in "CW Center" and I think it makes him interesting.

I feel even worse for Jensen now because you showed how alone he must be feeling, since he's the one with the "inappropriate" beliefs.

Now I'm the one saying that I hope there will be more!

jae

[jaenivitechia]

If you don't mind, I'd like to link to this on my journal.

jae

[kaylynnkie]

I'd love it! That really means a lot to me. Thank you.

[phlepa]

Wow this was vary good. I felt bad for Jensen for feeling so alone, but I also felt bad for Jared for not understanding him. I loved this, I hope you write more too. Thanks for writing it.

[kaylynnkie]

More is planned. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

[phlepa]

Your welcome! Oh I'm so glad you are doing more. :)

[kaylynnkie]

Thank you! The next part is in the works.

[kaylynnkie]

Thank you so much for the comment!