Salvation (A Wicked story -- 3/?)

[kaylle]

Title: Salvation (3/?)
Author: Kaylle
Pairing: E/F
Rating: Currently PG; might be higher in later chapters
Warnings: Musicalverse spoilers, but nothing you couldn't get from listening to the soundtrack

If you missed them, parts 1 and 2 were posted here.

Comments

[ennelya]

It's a lovely story, and I'm enjoying it very much! Continue this way, it's great!

[saime_joxxers]

Again, this is a really excellent story.

I like the way Fiyero would have become stronger and harder in the army. Again, it's one of those things that makes perfect sense... but I just never really thought of it. I really like reading things that makes me go 'Oh, that WOULD happen, wouldn't it?'

And I like Elphaba's confusion and longing when she touched him. It's very raw and very honest. Good job. -thumbs up-

[lfae]

Omg, so much love.

Once he lashed an arm out as if reaching for something, nearly tipping himself from the broom, and mumbled something that sounded suspiciously like her name.

Awww, Fiyero. xD And awww Elphie! "tried to ignore the tiny thrill that spread through her" FTW.

When they arrived, she whispered the spell to release the glamour that hid the cave from passersby

Oh dude. :D I love it.

the tone of voice varied between frustration and fear

That's so wonderfully Elphie! And I love how you've split this into his pov then hers then his again etc.

Oh, *Fiyero*. "His heart pounded with surprise and sudden, desperate hope" *dies*

They too were damp from the rain, but she wasn’t going to undress him any further.

xD! I quite adore her and her calmness with the task at hand here. What a good nurse she makes :D

Eighteen months in the Wizard’s service had hardened him, broadened him, sharpened the curves in his arms and shoulders.

That's really awesome and clever. So right :D

She tried to look at him dispassionately,

[katakokk]

This is a really lovely story! I know it's been a while, but do continue, I'd love to see more :)