SPN fic: "Gleaner of Souls" Part 1/5 (2075 words, R for language) -- REVISED DRAFT

[kayliemalinza]

I SWEAR I'M STILL WORKING ON THIS. I've been working on it constantly, actually, just not... part 2....

Anyway, I revised Part 1. The first half of Part 2 is done, so it should be up in the next week or so. (Ha ha. Ha.)

Comments

[kel_reiley]

!!!!!

You write pre-s4 Sam spot on. Also, there is more yes?

[kayliemalinza]

Yay, thank you! How'd you feel about Manakel? She's new and an OFC so I'd like to know if this chapter has adequate exposition and character introduction.

And yeah, more is coming down the line.....

[kel_reiley]

I find her VERY intriguing. I like her angel coldness sort of contradicted by the... sassy almost southern-ness? And whatever she's got going on with Lucifer? I like the hints that there's some sort of working relationship there, but it's not like she seems to trust any other angels, either.

You always have a way with words.

[kayliemalinza]

:D :D :D GOOD YES

"quickstart.rtf" takes place in Savannah, actually. GA REPRESENT. (I uh. Got aggravated at a fic that Did it Wrong and had to do my own....)

P.S. have you ever used your Detroit expertise for SPN fic? I'm thinking something to do with S5 + Lucifer but a casefic would be neat, too!