Comments | kayliemalinza: Ramble!fic wherein Jim is whipped in the line of duty (2,365 words, PG-13, Jim+Spock+Uhura)

kayliemalinza

Ramble!fic wherein Jim is whipped in the line of duty (2,365 words, PG-13, Jim+Spock+Uhura)

Sep 07, 2010 04:22

Fororder_of_chaos, who requested Uhura whipping Jim using Spock's hands as restraints. A fade-to-black counts, right?

( 2,365 words, PG-13 for language and sexual content, Jim+Spock+Uhura with mention of Bones, The Ex, and Pike )

st: ramble!verse, fic, star trek, chaos has a tag, fic: pg-13

Comments 27

re_white September 11 2010, 03:45:56 UTC

MY LOVE IS SINCERE AND KIND OF TINGLY.

kayliemalinza September 11 2010, 17:27:36 UTC

DID YOU MISS THIS BEFORE, BB? IT MUST HAVE BEEN LANGUISHING ON THE ?SKIP=100 PAGE OF YOUR FLIST, YEARNING TO MAKE YOU FEEL TINGLY.

spockside September 11 2010, 04:01:32 UTC

THIS.

"Spock is still standing to the side, displaying his impressive talent for not getting in on the action (although, to be fair, he is dating Uhura so his action-getting skills should maybe not be called into question.)"

How you twist such plain words into such wit is...unspeakably clever.

kayliemalinza September 11 2010, 17:55:14 UTC

omigosh, thank you. ^_^ I confess, I do have a few favorite five-syllable words, but I try to keep things simple. It's more effective, usually.

linstock September 11 2010, 04:06:49 UTC

Superlative and wonderful. I adored wise cracking flirtatious Kirk. And his interpretation of Spockisms were brilliant. Your Spock was so subtly sexy (less is definitely more). Gah! This just made my day.

kayliemalinza September 11 2010, 17:56:41 UTC

Thank you! Kirk and Spock--and any other ST character, really-- are just so much fun to write.

numara September 11 2010, 21:09:57 UTC

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SEXY AND FUNNY. i think the banter might have killed me. ;D

kayliemalinza September 13 2010, 03:14:03 UTC

Thank you! There were points when I thought, "Am I getting carried away with the banter?" and then I thought, "Screw that, it's FUN!"

Not that I wanted it to kill you, of course. >P

n_anon September 12 2010, 15:52:02 UTC

this was awesome! the crackling tension between Uhura and Kirk... i wonder that Spock would get pretty annoyed with Kirk but Kirk does it anyway.

but oh im getting away with myself.. i loved so many lines here but the last one. * sequels* perrrfect ending. x

n_anon September 12 2010, 15:59:29 UTC

edit : *squeals*

kayliemalinza September 13 2010, 12:47:16 UTC

Thanks! I think (or hope, anyway) that Kirk has figured out how to temper his flirting so that no-one gets too pissed. He's probably just projecting jealousy on Spock anyway. Uhura is the one Kirk really has to worry about. She doesn't let him get away with much! :P

You know, I suspect that typo is a Freudian slip. >>