Ramble!verse fic: McCoy/The Not-Yet-Ex, NC-17, 4,825 words

[kayliemalinza]

[ETA proper headers for cross-posting]
[Edited 6/02/13 to fix the final paragraph that's been bugging me for three years!]

Title: Wherein the Wife Does All the Work
Author: kayliemalinza
Word Count: 4,825
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Pairing: Leonard McCoy/The Not-Yet-Ex
Content Advisory: mild D/s, femdom, improvised bondage

Comments

[rubynye]

You deserve 100 more lines of comment than "God, they're gorgeous together." Though it makes me wonder how he ever managed to lose such an awesome lady.

[kayliemalinza]

I AM TEMPTED to ask for exactly 100 lines of comment from you, but that would be greedy, I suspect. :P

Without going into too much detail, the divorce was her idea. :/

here via rubynye

[secretsolitaire]

Holy crap, I loved this. What a fantastic Jocelyn you've created here! Gotta love a lush, strong woman who knows what she wants. And she and McCoy felt so real together.

Re: here via rubynye

[kayliemalinza]

Thanks so much! I'm really happy to hear that they seem real. ^_^

[azephirin]

This is AWESOME. I love your Leonard and your Jocelyn, fierce and spiky and smart. They both felt so complicated and real.

[kayliemalinza]

Thank you! Oooh, "spiky." I like that. :D

[kayliemalinza]

I'M SO HAPPY you liked the McCoy voice. I work really hard on doing character voices, and McCoy's in general is tricky because in terms of dialect it's my voice and I get nervous because of that. Thanks for this comment. ^_^

[re_white]

NNNGH.

[kayliemalinza]

:DDDDDD