Ramble!verse fic: Pike POV, wherein Pike breaks and enters and interrogates a dog.

Apr 12, 2010 22:01

Not the one-eyed dog, alas. She shows up in the next part.
Pike!Sis mentioned in absentia.

Follows directly from this fic.

Pike POV, 1,124 words, PG )

don't love me i will only hurt you, fic: pg, st: ramble!verse, fic: chaptered wip, fic, star trek, fic: draft

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possibly_thrice April 15 2010, 04:55:44 UTC
This is so adorable it is like shrapnel in my heart. Well... not exactly. But it's getting late and my similes are in turn leaning towards overripe, so. *HAS EXCUSE, ALSO IS ADORING AND THUS FORGIVABLE*

I really think your Pike voice is just generally awesome, although I can admittedly be kind of tonedeaf when it comes to characterization. Nevertheless! I love him and his mad interrogation skillz, everyone else should too!

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kayliemalinza April 16 2010, 04:33:55 UTC
Adorable? Adorable?! But-- I wanted this to be GRITTY and DARK! D:

Srsly though, it pleases me that for you this is simultaneously cute and horrifically violent. So no forgiveness necessary, methinks.

Psssh, tonedeaf. Shush. You enjoy my rank distortion interpretation of the character and don't, idk, wrinkle your nose in bemusement, so I feel successful. ^_^

And as soon as I put on some pants, I'm going to go write more.

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