Comments | kayliemalinza: Teaser: foundtosh.doc AKA toshanto AU (WARNING: WIP)

kayliemalinza

Teaser: foundtosh.doc AKA toshanto AU (WARNING: WIP)

Jan 22, 2009 04:41

WARNING: There are no promises that this will be finished or even continued. I am a bad person, etc ( Read more... )

wip, tw: tosh/ianto, fic: chaptered wip, fic, fic: pg-13, tw wip: foundtosh.doc, writing, tw: jack/ianto, tw: post s2, torchwood

Comments 17

silentstep January 23 2009, 23:23:33 UTC

ABFSDGBI SDGIUERNSKLASDGBASBWOUEN MOAR.

silentstep January 23 2009, 23:24:48 UTC

I mean:

I don't care about plot or promises or whatever, but Tosh! Leader!Ianto! Tosh/Ianto! Jack/Ianto! Gwen! sdgnhadsuasdgnasdgusdgm MORE!

...COHERENCY FAIL.

stunt_muppet January 24 2009, 02:51:26 UTC

Ooooh. Very mysterious. I love the way you wrote Other!Ianto and Tosh - they're different enough to raise the question of what's going on, but similar enough to be recognizable. And, personally, I love the style that this is written in, and I'm okay with there not being a plot for now. Letting the mystery build gives us more time to try puzzling things out for ourselves, and every scene serves a purpose - whether to give hints as to how the alternate universe is different, characterize Tosh and Other!Ianto, or just to...build atmosphere? I don't know, I'm not being terribly coherent, but every scene feels like it's needed, like it's winding up to something more. And I love that. I love being held in suspense.

What I mean to say is don't worry about it. I'm loving it so far, and the lack of plot isn't a problem.

annemjw January 28 2009, 10:54:14 UTC

Oh man. This is so good, and so original and yay ( ... )

deepgirl187 January 28 2009, 21:23:43 UTC

Coolness. I hope you do get a chance to finish this one, it's really well done.

midasu January 30 2009, 00:11:43 UTC

Awesome! I love the idea of an Ianto that isn't on the teams side but is only loyal to himself and his awesome alt!world girlfriend. Jack is right to be worried.