Comments | kayliemalinza: 2,965 words! That means I'm special!

kayliemalinza

2,965 words! That means I'm special!

Aug 28, 2008 07:36

Chapter Two of the fic I'm calling PP!I. The actual working title is spoilery, so I've abbreviated it ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

order_of_chaos August 29 2008, 11:31:08 UTC

2,965 words! That means I'm special! Yes, yes it does. *nods gleefully*

Fic continues to be MADE OF AWESOME!

Ianto sighed deeply. "When I was about eleven and twelve, I went through a phase."
"I see," said Jack.
"I'm not proud of it," said Ianto.
I, like Tosh, am giggling quietly in the background :D

MiniIanto not only continues to pwn Owen, but might, possibly burn down the hub when they're sleeping. Life is good. *cackles*
Also, loved Ianto's expressions as seen by Tosh's reactions to them. Brilliant!

criccieth September 16 2008, 13:27:41 UTC

ok it's taken me several minutes to stop laughing enough to write

Now, I knew who the kid was going to be from the second I read the two teasers: I mean, a Welsh boy coming forward in time - who else is it going to be? But I just LOVE this. I've seen people writing trying to make "our" Ianto a brat and it doesn't work because - hey, guy's in his twenties. But this - oh yes. And one can just imagine Ianto back at the Hub listening to it all and cringing with embarrassment whilst Tosh tries not to howl with laughter.....

LOVE the whole Owen bit as well. EArger for part 3!

flowright September 18 2008, 06:05:35 UTC

I usually love your Ianto, but as a swearing smart ass kid he's even better (and probably canon). Will you write more about him ?

kayliemalinza September 18 2008, 06:08:01 UTC

This is a WiP that I fully intend to continue, but my intentions are known to be not worth much. :/ I can't promise anything, but I do like this story rather a lot, so there's a good chance I'll get more done.

lilithofdaemons September 19 2008, 15:54:05 UTC

I cannot continue to read your fics while I'm at work...My random bursts of cackles are scarring my co-workers
Bloody brilliant as always.

kelspots December 26 2008, 10:32:21 UTC

Ok, this is awesome. Awesome! I really hope there's more around here somewhere. Also, if it was me in this situation, I'd be fleeing the Hub not to avoid crossing any timelines or anything, but because I'd be way too embarrassed to see myself at that age.

kayliemalinza December 26 2008, 19:18:28 UTC

Ah ha! You have reminded me that I never linked to Chapter Three. That's done now. ^^

And don't worry, Ianto gets plenty embarrassed later. Muahaha.