Section twooooooo!

Jul 14, 2008 06:56

Section Two of the Untitled Torchwood fic, now tentatively called The CL Story, part of the GEA universe. My acronyms, they are mysterious ( Read more... )

cl of gea universe, fic: chaptered wip, fic, fic: g, comment-fic, that damn story aka morelandjd, antler chandelier, writing, tw: jack/ianto, tw: post s2, torchwood

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order_of_chaos July 14 2008, 11:43:39 UTC
*gigglefit* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY FIC!

Loved your use of euphemism. Loved Jack's use of innuendo and his incoming lips - which Gwen totally set Ianto up for! *grin* Loved the "children should keep better control of their parents" conversation.
Want to devour mint chocolate chip ice cream, which is frustrating because the supermarkets where I live seem to have randomly stopped stocking it.

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Would blather. Would love to blather. But now you mention it my mind goes blank of all relevant canon and reminds me plaintively that it wanted Jack to flirt with the space-whale, not just empathize with it. You could blather at me, though.

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kayliemalinza July 18 2008, 11:42:21 UTC
You are my favorite commenter. ^_^

I kinda like how Gwen is coming out in this story-- it's the way you think she must be when Rhys/A Sekrit/Her Righteousness isn't involved. Also, the dynamic between just three characters-- and specifically those three characters-- is more fun and intimate than TW ensemble generally is. I still need to write more Tosh, though. :/

I re-watched Meat* and I think I know where to go now, but haven't written it yet because I got distracted with revising That Damn Story again (the beginning and end of part 1. Don't ask me about part 3. Just... don't. :/ ) aaaaaaaand I finished section two of the antler chandelier story-- sadly without zombie deer ( ... )

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order_of_chaos July 19 2008, 07:39:22 UTC
*grin* ^_^

I like your Gwen. She's fun. And made of the bits of canon!Gwen that don't make me cringe.

She should be called that. Who would call her that? Owen, maybe.
Owen: Yes, your Righteousness. *drips sarcasm* I'll be right on it.
Gwen: Grrrrrrr.

Tosh is lovely. You could bring her back as a zombie hologram.

"Did he want to have sex with the whale?" "No," I said. "He just wanted to keep it."
Awwwwww. *wipes away a single, solitary tear* That was beautiful.

I had a Mint Mocha Chip from Starbucks the other day and it was nice. ^_^
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

I can live without zombie deer - and zombie pigeons, for that matter. And anyway, they're probably still out there, and just haven't arrived yet. THEY STALK THE HILLS BY MOONLIGHT, LURCHING EVER CLOSER.

THUMP.

THUMP.

THUMP.

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kayliemalinza July 19 2008, 09:53:21 UTC
Tosh is lovely. You could bring her back as a hologram.
OMG HAVE YOU BEEN READING MY NOTES??!? O.O

She should be called that. Who would call her that? Owen, maybe.
Owen: Yes, your Righteousness. *drips sarcasm* I'll be right on it.
Gwen: Grrrrrrr.
Or better yet, Gwen turns to the others and asks, "Why does he call me that?" Awkward silence ensues. Or maybe Ianto, still ticked off from hte end of "Meat," explains it in excruciating detail.

If it makes you feel better, the Mint Mocha Chip wasn't that minty? It did have caffeine, though, and caffeine makes me happy.

THUMP. THUMP. THUMP. om nom nom.

Hopefully the vegetable barricade will keep the zombie deer at bay. ^^

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