Comments | kayliemalinza: TW fic: "Preventative Measures for Alien Hygiene" Jack/Ianto, PG-13

kayliemalinza

TW fic: "Preventative Measures for Alien Hygiene" Jack/Ianto, PG-13

Jun 26, 2008 05:43

Title: Preventative Measures for Alien Hygiene
Word Count: 491
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: Hard PG-13, depending on your imagination
Warning: Mild bondage
Setting: Sometime in Season Two
Summary: Just a casual night with Dom!Ianto. Also, a dash of alien botany.

( Preventative Measures for Alien Hygiene )

tw: jack/ianto, fic, tw: s2, torchwood, fic: pg-13

Comments 16

order_of_chaos June 26 2008, 11:01:03 UTC

I'm left with a vivid impression of scratchy, possibly-painful rope, pale-blue pustules, and Jack very happy to be at Ianto's mercy. I always like seeing Jack happy; tied up and comfortable and happy is even better. *grins*
And Dom!Ianto! It suits him.

kayliemalinza June 27 2008, 02:33:10 UTC

Originally the pale blue pustules were in concentric circles, but the rhythm didn't work out. Pity. >P

Jack very happy to be at Ianto's mercy. And Dom!Ianto! It suits him.
Yes and yes. Doesn't canon just scream that?
"You take the roof. You're good on roofs."
"Ok!" (scampers off)
The power dynamic in that scene is actually pretty complicated, but Dom!Ianto is definitely part of it.

P.S. Jack is military-- doesn't that automatically mean he's a switch?

adafrog June 27 2008, 12:44:40 UTC

"Ok!" (scampers off)
lol Love this image.

kayliemalinza June 28 2008, 03:39:13 UTC

Jack's eager exit was marred only by him turning back and saying, "So, you're gonna date me, right? Right? That's what you said, right? We're totally going on a date! Sweet!" >P

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adafrog June 27 2008, 12:43:26 UTC

Great.

flmun June 27 2008, 16:39:25 UTC

Brilliant! I love that Jack doesn't want to stop dating Ianto, so won't fire him. And this is my favorite line of the week "I'm always 'toppy,'" said Ianto. He spared a moment from unlocking the trunk to smirk. "Sometimes we roleplay that you're in charge."

magicom June 27 2008, 21:18:05 UTC

That was my favourite line as well :)

dvanulya June 28 2008, 03:35:28 UTC

...and mine...

kayliemalinza June 28 2008, 03:40:08 UTC

Thanks! That line made me smile when I wrote it.

coloronthewalls June 27 2008, 19:51:42 UTC

Hee! I love toppy!Ianto, and you do a good job with their banter. Nice work!

kayliemalinza June 28 2008, 03:40:41 UTC

Thanks! toppy!Ianto and banter-- my favorite things about the show, I think.

Aside from the blowfish. The blowfish was awesome.

kakareen June 28 2008, 19:41:50 UTC

Typical Whovian cheesy-but-wonderful.

kelspots December 26 2008, 08:36:27 UTC

The roleplay comment is indeed very awesome, but what had me giggling was this line: "I don't want to be at the mercy of someone who might hurt me!" Jack cried. "By the way, do you want my pants on? Off?"
*snort* SO very Jack!