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[kayliemalinza]

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The hell?

I've been having a lot of problems with this fic-- it's the first srs Torchwood fic I've done, set in the first few episodes of Season 2. It's about Jack and Ianto rebuilding their relationship-- or rather, trying to rebuild their relationship, because evry1 knows that

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[order_of_chaos]

*beams* They're good at talking, though, when they're not trying to say anything. Just them in each other's company, with banter - unresolved issues aside, it's rather lovely. I'm glad we got to wee this bit, even if it didn't cooperate fitting into the main fic :)

"We'd better not," he says. Aw. Dammit.

[kayliemalinza]

They're good at talking, though, when they're not trying to say anything.
That was rather a problem, actually.

Me: Ok! Emotional issues! Discuss!
Jack: Actually, I'm gonna flirt for a while.
Ianto: I've a few snide remarks I've been saving up....
Jack: Oh, is that a fact?
Ianto: Indeed it is.
Jack: Well why don't you... lay those snide remarks on me?
Ianto: They could definitely get laid, yes, but I prefer to use these remarks to pierce gently. Slow, with a bit of sting.
Jack: Ooh. ^^
Me: STOP IT.

I'm glad we got to wee this bit
I didn't know you could do that! My, you are talented. >D

Aw. Dammit.
muahahahahahaha.....