Torchwood!Fic: Casualties- One Coat

[kayliemalinza]

Title: Casualties- One Coat
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Setting: the end of Sleeper (2x02), after Ianto gives Jack That Look and before Beth exits the episode.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 638

Comments

[adjovi]

just fantastic! great voices, spot on characterization.

[genagirl]

I think you got them both just right. I love Ianto's awkwardness, the unsettled feeling you bring to him. Very lovely work!

[kelspots]

Ok, so I'm a bit late to the comment party, but this is the third time I've read this fic so I figured I really should say something. And that something is that I love it. I really like how you write Ianto as so very obviously dominant but still unsure and hesitant at times.

Also, I'm perusing your LJ to re-read all your TW fics and make sure I haven't missed any, so you'll probably be seeing quite a few comments from me in the near future. Hope you don't mind :)

[kayliemalinza]

One can never be too late to a comment party, unlessing of course the person being commented to is dead or permanently off LJ or something. And I am neither! So thanks very much for your comment, and I'll be looking forward to the others. ^_^

I really like how you write Ianto as so very obviously dominant but still unsure and hesitant at times.
Oh, yay. That's such a great description. I don't know if I knew quite what I was doing there-- now that you've said it, it's so obvious-- but I think I'll use this nice little sentence as one of my Maxims O' Characterization from now on. ^^