Fic: First Day Jitters (NCIS)

Mar 27, 2009 21:00

Title: First Day Jitters
Author: kaylashay81
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Genre: Gen
Fandoms: NCIS
Word Count: 1,000
Character(s): Kate-centric
Timeline: Episode Tag to 01x02 Hung Out To Dry
Beta: azraelz_angel
Challenge: ncis1000words; Challenge #1
Prompt: "I get the distinct impression you've never done this before."

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fandom: ncis, .noncrossover, .fanfic, challenge: ncis1000words, .genre: gen, character: kate todd (ncis)

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milanthruil March 28 2009, 04:52:42 UTC
HEE! The pea pod analogy made my day much happier. :) This is a wonderful little bit of fic.

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kaylashay March 31 2009, 17:48:52 UTC
Thanks! I wrote the pea pod analogy before I did anything else.

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kateri_e March 28 2009, 16:20:02 UTC
LOL, oh the pod bit was too funny. Great short

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kaylashay March 31 2009, 17:49:17 UTC
Thanks!

:-)

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sasha1600 March 28 2009, 17:36:15 UTC
HA! Great analogy! I liked Abby's little comment about them being 'tasty' peas, too (despite the difficulty I have getting 'vile green blobs' and 'tasty' into the same thought... ;-)

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kaylashay March 31 2009, 17:50:02 UTC
See, I like peas. I have a friend who absolutely hates them, even thinking about them.

Of course Abby thinks they're tasty peas. :-)

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sasha1600 March 31 2009, 19:39:08 UTC
Blech. Only thing I spat out as baby food. Still won't eat 'em.

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azraelz_angel March 28 2009, 23:23:54 UTC
Great job getting in Kate's head. I loved it.

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kaylashay March 31 2009, 17:50:48 UTC
It's rare for me to venture out of Tony and Gibbs territory. And I still can't believe you didn't find anything wrong on it when you read it.

:-)

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ami_ven March 29 2009, 23:03:46 UTC
Very nice. Your look from Kate's view was great, and I loved how Abby couldn't describe Gibbs and Tony. Lovely.

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kaylashay March 31 2009, 17:51:30 UTC
:-)

Thanks! Gibbs and Tony are hard to describe, especially to someone who doesn't know them.

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