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Fic: The Games We Play (NCIS)

Apr 27, 2008 22:10

Title: The Games We Play
Author: kaylashay81
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Challenge: ncisdrabble100; Challenge #83 - Games
Spoilers: General spoilers through season five.
Word Count: 5 x 100

Crossposted: ncisdrabble100; ncisfanfic

Summary: A look into the games involved in the life of five different females.
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fandom: ncis, .genre: gen, challenge: five things, character: jeanne benoit (ncis), challenge: ncisdrabbles100, .fanfic, .noncrossover, character: ziva david (ncis), character: kelly gibbs (ncis), character: abby sciuto (ncis), character: kate todd (ncis)

Comments 13

donutsweeper April 28 2008, 03:38:06 UTC

oh these were all great (and I guess them all correctly), but the Kelly one was powerful- like a knife in the gut (in a good way)

kaylashay April 28 2008, 03:40:47 UTC

I wanted to hug Gibbs close after I wrote the Kelly one...

:-)

kayleyangel April 28 2008, 03:41:53 UTC

I always love the way you capture each of the characters in NCIS so well.

kaylashay April 28 2008, 03:50:45 UTC

Thanks! Hearing that makes me happy because character is what I try to get right the most when I'm writing for any show. No matter what I have them doing, I want them to sound like they do in the show.

mylogiceatsyou April 28 2008, 04:14:32 UTC

Oh god. You are so good at these five part stories. I also feel so immensely proud when I guess them, lol.

The Kate one - so very her, needing to feel like 'one of the guys' or, at least feel like an equal, and the Kelly one...oh god.

Awesome.

kaylashay April 28 2008, 04:30:30 UTC

The five thing fics really get me writing. :-)

The Kelly one punched my own gut while I wrote it...

Glad you liked!

redvelvetribbon April 28 2008, 09:19:00 UTC

They were all good but Abbys was the killer for me.Usually vanilla worked just fine .. great line and yeh after the funeral and being shot at and ... and I would want release to.
Great stuff.

kaylashay April 28 2008, 14:35:05 UTC

I definitely see Abby as the kind to need a release every now and then. Glad that one worked for you!

:-)

Thanks for reviewing!

strangevisitor7 April 28 2008, 16:05:29 UTC

Excellent charater moments. Each Woman was so well defined that I knew without looking that I'd guessed them correctly

kaylashay April 28 2008, 17:43:43 UTC

Thanks! I really like how this came out considering I got the idea and wrote it in around 15 minutes. :-)

strangevisitor7 April 28 2008, 17:49:09 UTC

It's always fun when you don't have to beat an idea into submission.