Wow, creative packaging! I bet not many things got Brock with those movers but I am with Peter, yuck. Poor Neal, ouchy for more than 4 hours.
So scary, too, not knowing where you are going or what kind of reception you will get. Your POV is awesome.
I'm glad El knows what she is doing. So many of her comments could have been for either of them, that was cool. I'm glad she like Neal, and he seems to trust her even if he is worried about what Peter will think their relationship.
I love his struggle over sharing his name and all of the facts he can pull together from that one scene.
Aww, Peter and El are so kind and gentle. I thought El being used to slave, would have treated Neal cold or bored or a thing instead of a person. But El is nice too.
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So scary, too, not knowing where you are going or what kind of reception you will get. Your POV is awesome.
I'm glad El knows what she is doing. So many of her comments could have been for either of them, that was cool. I'm glad she like Neal, and he seems to trust her even if he is worried about what Peter will think their relationship.
I love his struggle over sharing his name and all of the facts he can pull together from that one scene.
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Loved the fic.
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Neal has learned to adapt to changing situations and he soaks up info like a sponge.
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I thought El being used to slave, would have treated Neal cold or bored or a thing instead of a person. But El is nice too.
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