Comments | kaylashay: Fic: Iron Guts Kelly (NCIS)

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Fic: Iron Guts Kelly (NCIS)

Jun 29, 2009 00:06

Title: Iron Guts Kelly
Author: kaylashay81
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not Bellesario or CBS, so I don't claim to own them.
Genre: AU Gen
Characters: Tony; Kelly Gibbs
Word Count: 1,000
Setting: Pre-Series; Summer of 2002
Beta: satyrnfive

Verse: Iron Guts Kelly Verse

Written For: ncis1000words Challenge #14 - Reverse Fandom: M*A*S*H
Note: Title of M*A*S*H episode 03x04 inspired ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, challenge: ncis1000words, .genre: gen, character: anthony dinozzo (ncis), collection: iron guts kelly, challenge: mash titles, .fanfic, .noncrossover, character: kelly gibbs (ncis)

Comments 14

lil_jei June 29 2009, 09:56:15 UTC

I don't know what to say other than I liked it and it was very interesting. Your Kelly was written pretty well and Tony was just adorable.

kaylashay June 30 2009, 01:21:08 UTC

Yay! I'm happy Kelly turned out well. And Tony is always adorable. :-)

thefannishwaldo June 29 2009, 16:53:06 UTC

Okay, I'm going to actually have to read this off-line when I get home (See internet fail from hell at my LJ if you care), but using that title like this?

BRILLIANT!

kaylashay June 30 2009, 01:23:08 UTC

The MASH challenge has eaten my muse alive. I will be posting my 4th one shortly and it is in the same verse as this one was.

I saw that title and *knew* I had to write something with Kelly. My first thought was something when she was young and Gibbs got to witness, but then that made me sad. Then Tony said he wanted to call her iron guts and I ran with it.

I'm pondering a Supernatural crossover for one of the titles now. :-)

ami_ven June 29 2009, 18:18:52 UTC

Fantastic! I love Tony-and-Kelly stories, and yours is great.

kaylashay June 30 2009, 01:24:01 UTC

Hee! Tony-and-Kelly is so much fun to do. I have another one I'll be posting soon that's set within this same verse I've kinda created in my head. :-)

sasha1600 June 30 2009, 04:30:39 UTC

Loved the brother/sister relationship you're building between these two. It fits so well with the father/son thing between Tony and Gibbs. And I love the look I'm imagining on Tony's face at the idea of dating Gibbs's daughter!

kaylashay June 30 2009, 04:34:52 UTC

:-)

Oh yeah, dating Kelly is like the death sentence in Tony's mind. There are fences and barriers, highly trained guard dogs that bite off sensitive boy bits, etc... :-)

I still have to figure out exactly what Gibbs and Tony's relationship will be in the verse. You know, I flip-flop between slash and gen with those two that I never know what's going to come out when writing a fic with them in it.

But I'm definitely doing the brother/sister route for Tony and Kelly. Tony needs someone just as much as Kelly needs someone that is not her dad.

sasha1600 June 30 2009, 04:51:38 UTC

Well, *so far* the 'verse has a strong gen vibe to it. The way Tony thinks about Gibbs's reactions is more father/son than slashy.

Of course, the 'verse could veer off in any direction according to the whims of your Muse!

And yeah, Kelly and Tony need each other. Of course, in my world they'd be getting into mischief together... *g*

kaylashay June 30 2009, 04:55:30 UTC

And in your world, they'd be punished together. :-)

Yeah, I've set it up gen for the moment... I'm kinda leaning toward keeping it there, but then I haven't had any full Tony and Gibbs interaction yet. Who knows. When I try to write Tony/Abby, Gibbs somehow always slips in there. And when I aim for gen with them, the slash just sometimes pops up. We'll have to see what the muse has planned.

All that said, I would like to play with how Kelly would deal with her father being in a relationship with a man at some point. I'm not sure this is the verse for it, but I'll have stew over that.

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