For the first time in three years, I have finished my Two Lines fic in time to make the deadline. Will wonders never cease.
Can't Run But
by kaydee falls
rating: PG-13
a gen fic featuring Draco Malfoy and Regulus Black
disclaimer: not mine, no profit, don't sue
notes: written for Shanalle's Two Lines challenge 2005. Huge thanks to
anothersuperboy for looking it
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The thing about this fic is that it has drawn me in in a way no fic has for a terrible long time. The plotting and the connection and paralelling of Regulus & Draco worked so well. Also I liked that none of it was hysterically dramatic. There are so many lines I just loved -- and I just thought "wow. perfect".
That being said, I'm not sure you need the last two lines -- they are a little twee. But otherwise I really enjoyed it. It is a fic that has made me think -- and I treasure fics that have a brain. :)
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And you're probably right about the last lines -- I went through phases where I alternately liked and hated them. Ah, well.
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Thank you for sharing it!
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