Kurt
Santana
Rachel
Puck
Sugar
Mike
Dave
Interview
Confessional
The roommates are all gathered around the pool area. Kurt is lounging on one of the chaise lounges, plate of pizza in his lap and a tall icy drink on the ground beside him. Rachel is on the lounge next to him, sipping on her own icy drink, wearing her bikini top and pink short short shorts.
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You make it as intense as the canon did !
I can't wait for the next part !
I'm just a big fan of this type of fics because you can put in it everyone else reactions to what happen to everyone andd it makes me go rfjedizsjdjeun all the time.
Plus the characterization is super awesome for everyone !
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Yeah, everyone knowing right away what happened makes a huge difference on how Dave as a character will be handled. In canon, he just got off too easily, the only people who know about the kiss are still just Kurt and Blaine and that's just ridiculous. Everyone's going to have a bit of a reaction when they find out.
Sugar is the hardest for me, because she's so easy to take too far. Shannon posted about her on tumblr the other day and it really made me think about the character in a new light (and I rewatched Heart yesterday before I started writing). When I write their dialogue, if I can't hear it in my head as if the actual actor is speaking it, it doesn't work for me. I'm glad Sugar turned out how I wanted her to, since we don't have three years of her to work with.
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Oh, but could you maybe pick a specific color for each character instead of switching them around every chapter because it got kinda confusing yeah fffff ;v;
OMG Santana and Puck is perf and I really adore the way youve been writing Sugar! She has so few lines in canon really but your Sugar seems so In Character Effortlessly compared to other fics where their sugar was too...random or intensely therapist-ish or dumb.
--Moa
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I've tried to keep consistent with the colors, but with the exception of Sugar and Santana, I can never remember the exact shade I used for the other ones. So just know Mike will be dark greenish, Rachel is orangeish and Puck is maroonish.
Sugar is hard, because we don't have much to work with for her, but I watched Heart right before I wrote this chapter so I could get her tone right, it's good to know I've succeeded and that she's believable.
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I was so concerned with making sure everyone knew what a man I was that I was constantly chickening out and acting like a boy.
There are a lot of great lines in this, but this might be my favorite. On to chapter 4...
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