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The Other Side - Ch.6

Aug 28, 2011 00:44

Title: The Other Side - Ch.6 Author: kaybee38
Word Count: 3192
Rating: R (This chapter is really PG-15 though)
Pairings: Minho/Onew, ninja!JongKey, Cousin!Taemin
Genre:vampire, fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHinee is owned by SM Entertainment only
Summary: Minho’s a vampire, Key’s a shapeshifter, Jjong is a werewolf and Taemin is ( Read more... )

kaybee38, pairing: jonghyun/key, pairing: minho/onew, !fic: the other side, taemin, #rating: r, taemin's a pimp

Comments 28

byeogdol August 28 2011, 05:00:37 UTC

Whee! :D Spot.

byeogdol August 28 2011, 05:15:03 UTC

Hello! I do feel that you are one of the better writers here on LJ, especially when dealing with alternate universe. And I may not be a fan of vampire/werewolves sort of world (Personal opinion: I feel like just because Stephanie Meyer wrote a vamp plot and hit it big, too many authors are jumping on the bandwagon as well.) BUT you managed to draw me in, despite that ( ... )

kaybee38 August 28 2011, 05:32:27 UTC

I appreciate your honesty! And the compliment! I, by no means feel that I am a better writer than most here on LJ, as I am still growing and learning as a writer. That being said. I actually agree with you. I struggled with this chapter quite a bit, and edited it down a bunch because I felt that it was too wordy. You've convinced me to edit it more. I stopped writing Ignis for a bit because my muse disappeared and my writing got stale. This fic is sort of my way of getting my mojo back to finish that story. I don't really read many vamp fics either for the very reasons that you mentioned. (I don't like Twilight at all). I guess the song just spoke to me and that's why we ended up here.

The next chapter has more action, so I hope you'll come back and let me know if you find it more interesting!

ontaejongminkey August 28 2011, 05:26:24 UTC

Spot♥

ontaejongminkey August 28 2011, 05:52:13 UTC

;~; Poor Minho. He's had a rough past. Jonghyun's hilarious XD I just love his wolfy character in here^^ Naked and strutting. lmfao

Jinki's not just your average human, isn't he? Omg. I'm so excited about the reveal of his true nature(?) hehe.

PS. Heechul's gonna be super duper missed ;~;

imvus August 28 2011, 13:04:28 UTC

SPOT!! , will be back after work!

imvus August 29 2011, 00:07:48 UTC

This chapter was not too long!! Now we know a little of Minho's past, poor bb. But Jinki... he has me puzzled. (was he bitten once already?) have to go back and read again. Key and his purse...lololol. Still want Taemin's hot ass.

Jinki,Jinki, Jinki.....what is it? I can't put my finger on it.

Yeah... your good....(nods head, two finger to my eyes and pointed back at you) lol

p.s. hope you stay safe!

kaybee38 August 29 2011, 00:34:28 UTC

Ok good. I'm glad you liked it! I haven't revealed everything yet about Jinki yet. *giggle*. I saw this shot of Key and couldn't resist.

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imvus August 29 2011, 01:20:48 UTC

I'm glad you are okay.

Uhmmmm that bag...uh uh... me no likey, Key can do so much better then that.

(sends energy bars and bottle of Tequila to help in the writing process)

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mikaerayohiko August 28 2011, 13:39:25 UTC

D: Waaaa it's been awhile since I read your fics :O This one is cool too, as expected.

I can wait to read more for this and your other fics too :D

kaybee38 August 28 2011, 14:26:05 UTC

Hey there! How have you been? *waves* I'm glad you like this. Thanks for commenting!

acornmama August 28 2011, 15:24:17 UTC

For my own part, it could have been longer, but that is because I am greedy. It gets worse and worse with talented writers like you out there spoiling me with your words.
Yes, now we know more about Jinki. He is a bit extraordinary. Like him more and more. Key is funny. Heechul is the man. Taeminnie has a heart? It's mostly apparent when he's with Jinki.
Jjong is lucky he switched back to human in the elevator!! Lucky neighbor lady!!
Where you in the path of the storm too? Hope everything is okay.

kaybee38 August 28 2011, 20:57:08 UTC

Ok good. I'm glad you liked it! I'd pass out if an elevator door opened and Jjong was just standing there naked. We're fine. Everyone was making a big deal out of Hurricane IRene pummeling NY, but it never happened, we just got a lot of wind and rain. No biggie. Working on the next chappie as we speak!

acornmama August 29 2011, 10:54:11 UTC

Wait, you're in NY? Me too. Yeah, we got bupkiss and the city closed down. I am glad the transit workers did not have to be out in it but all we got was a funky tail wind. Thank Goodness.

kaybee38 August 30 2011, 02:44:35 UTC

Yep. I'm not even going to get into how horribly handled the whole thing was. I just kept thinking that if something happened, I mean really happened. We'd have no way out. No trains, buses, planes, all the bridges were up. We were effectively cut off.

So I wrote more on this fic to calm myself down. LOL