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The Other Side - ch. 4

Aug 15, 2011 22:48

Title: The Other Side - Ch.4
Author: kaybee38
Word Count: 2755
Rating: R
Pairings: Minho/Onew, ninja!JongKey, Cousin!Taemin
Genre:vampire, fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHinee is owned by SM Entertainment only

Summary: Minho’s a vampire, Key’s a shapeshifter, Jjong is a werewolf and Taemin is a vampire hunter. Jinki is the mortal object of ( Read more... )

kaybee38, pairing: jonghyun/key, pairing: minho/onew, !fic: the other side, taemin, #rating: r, #vampfic

Comments 19

stjoan4eva August 17 2011, 22:52:04 UTC

Adored the additions you added in, holy crap! As usual, you are a class act and your writing sets my heart racing!

onewlurver August 19 2011, 21:52:36 UTC

God I love this chapter a lot! Badass Jjong- were and the ever so sultry Minho. Best combo ever.

acornmama August 28 2011, 14:23:12 UTC

I am so behind in this story, but I love catching up.
Nicely done on the action scene. Siwon is the bad guy? Can I tell you, just whenI saw Siwon's name Ithought of Kyuhyun and wishef he could have been in the story somewhere, somehow. Then suddenly he was! Bless you!
But Siwon killed him, and said it was all for Minho....oh please don't tell me Kyu was actually a bad guy and Siwon was actually protecting him. Ugh ..... let me stop before I work myself into a knot.
Love your vampires, and your werewolves too, abd your whole story.

kaybee38 August 28 2011, 14:24:47 UTC

awww. I'm glad you like! No Kyu is not the bad guy, there will be flashback of him and his goodness, you'll see! Thanks for commenting!

pimsky January 29 2012, 19:04:13 UTC

No sooner had the thought slipped into Minho’s consciousness when it was interrupted by the sound of tearing fabric and a sharp intake of breath as Jonghyun shivered and then fell forward in a dead faint. By the time he hit the ground however, his hands and feet were large paws, claws scraping the pavement and his body was covered in soft mottled brown fur.
I really love how you described Jonghyun's transformation into a wherewolf, it's so original!!

“I do believe it’s time you started looking for a new guard dog.” Siwon said, till holding the pearl handled revolver. Minho’s smirk dropped as he thought of Jonghyun howling in pain. Where are you little guy? Come on ( ... )