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kaybee38

Ignis 20/?

Mar 27, 2011 01:18

Title: Ignis/Chapter 20 - "Bait"
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 2,600
Pairings: friendship!Jonghyun/Onew, Minho/Onew, Taemin/Sulli, eventual!JongKey, broken!Minho/Yuri
Genre: fantasy, sci-fi
Disclaimer: SHINee, Super Junior, DBSK and f(x) are owned by SM Entertainment only
Summary: Teneo are humans that live among us that have a genetic ( Read more... )

pairing: minho/onew, broken!minho/yuri, pairing: taemin/sulli, #rating: pg-15, friendship!jongyu, !fic: ignis, eventual!jongkey

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kaybee38 March 27 2011, 16:28:21 UTC

I'm glad you liked! Thanks for reading and commenting! (Don't worry what Heenim's hiding will be revealed in the next chapter).

Spots mah self xD mikaerayohiko March 27 2011, 06:27:37 UTC

Curious!! LIKE i'M GONNA DIE I hope you update soon :OOOOOOO

“Buy why you?” Onew said quietly from the chair behind him. “And why didn’t he atack you?”-- ;3 typo bb :DDDDDDDD and the 'calulate' one too :D typo. ^^

;D 21! Xddd PLEASE!

Re: Spots mah self xD kaybee38 March 27 2011, 16:28:55 UTC

Oops! Thanks for poitning out the typos, I fixed 'em! Next chapter coming this week.!

Re: Spots mah self xD mikaerayohiko March 28 2011, 03:20:02 UTC

wohooo :3 yeheeeey!! <3

ontaejongminkey March 27 2011, 07:10:15 UTC

SPOTTINGFLAILING<3

ontaejongminkey March 27 2011, 07:22:32 UTC

And the plot thickens and thickens and thickens...
lol XDD

Excellent update! ^^v
I absolutely love this story of yours<3

kaybee38 March 27 2011, 16:29:32 UTC

Wow thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

kaybee38 March 27 2011, 07:14:19 UTC

spot for stjoan4eva

stjoan4eva March 27 2011, 11:25:44 UTC

Ok one, um, fucking UNF on the Onew transformation, yum! And well played.

Two, I get the feeling Q knows what's up, because Minho bb is smooth but not that smooth...this operation is going to be very interesting.

Three, this line here gets the gold star: I-I just wanted to update my look a little bit. What? You don’t like it?” Onew’s face dropped as he pouted a bit, suddenly insecure as he nervously ran a hand through his hair. Jonghyun recognized his old friend then, as he sighed and shook his head.

“No. No it’s fine. I guess even we’re entitled to a mid-life crisis.” Jonghyun chuckled as he busied his hands coiling up the heart monitor cable, securing with the velcro strap.

“As long as you don’t show up to a meeting with a blonde 19 year old girl on your arm, we’ll be fine.”

Onew laughed a bit then.

Cracked up there. XD

Everything is getting so intense! *flail* I mean more than it was before...right.

kaybee38 March 27 2011, 17:53:08 UTC

Yaaayyyy!!! *Dances around* I'm glad you liked. Yes. Jinki is nummy

kaybee38 March 27 2011, 07:15:06 UTC

spot for kinnosuikazura

kyttenfae March 30 2011, 19:32:33 UTC

*bounces* ok this is getting /so/ interesting. Also, transformed Onew? GnnnnnnnnFF. Almost /everyone/ seems to have something going on on the side, so many threads of awesome mystery, kekekeke. I loved how intense poor Onew was that Minho not do it. *squishes them*