Chapter 2

Nov 17, 2010 13:12

 
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fanfic: mutant 8

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kapot35 November 17 2010, 23:42:51 UTC
I really like the plot, but I think sometimes is a little hard to understand due to language issues. If you want, I could try to beta it for you (Although I'm not sure if I'll have the time)

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kapot35 November 17 2010, 23:47:53 UTC
Just an afterthought: I really think this story has a great potential - it's the first time I even think of offering to beta someones work. I usually just stop reading...
And I'm not a native speaker of english either, but am a professional translator - so I'd be glad to help^^

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kawaitahana November 18 2010, 01:21:58 UTC
Oh, I feel rally happy someone want to be my beta

If you have time, you can start with this two chapter, If you can finish this two, I'll send you the next chapter

is that ok?

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kapot35 November 18 2010, 01:39:27 UTC
Sure, I'll send it back to you as soon as I finish it

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odeia_chan November 18 2010, 10:19:28 UTC
Very interesting !
Intriguing.

I'm looking forward the next chapter, the story will really begin, I'm curious.

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kawaitahana November 28 2010, 07:40:30 UTC
yes, the story really begin now!

please wait for the next chapter... ^0^

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sonia_san November 27 2010, 01:28:40 UTC
Yasu = Sadist

Ah it became more interesting! Ryosuke? Ainosuke in hidarime? UWOHHH honto suggoi!!! Please update soon... Please... I really want to know what actually happen... ;__;

Also! Keep writing! Hmph!!

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kawaitahana November 28 2010, 07:42:59 UTC
You'll find out about that in the next chapter... maybe...

Please wait for the next chapter... I'm still waiting any news from my beta.

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