Chapter 2

[kawaitahana]

 

Comments

[kapot35]

I really like the plot, but I think sometimes is a little hard to understand due to language issues. If you want, I could try to beta it for you (Although I'm not sure if I'll have the time)

[kapot35]

Just an afterthought: I really think this story has a great potential - it's the first time I even think of offering to beta someones work. I usually just stop reading...
And I'm not a native speaker of english either, but am a professional translator - so I'd be glad to help^^

[kawaitahana]

Oh, I feel rally happy someone want to be my beta

If you have time, you can start with this two chapter, If you can finish this two, I'll send you the next chapter

is that ok?

[kapot35]

Sure, I'll send it back to you as soon as I finish it

[odeia_chan]

Very interesting !
Intriguing.

I'm looking forward the next chapter, the story will really begin, I'm curious.

[kawaitahana]

yes, the story really begin now!

please wait for the next chapter... ^0^

[sonia_san]

Yasu = Sadist

Ah it became more interesting! Ryosuke? Ainosuke in hidarime? UWOHHH honto suggoi!!! Please update soon... Please... I really want to know what actually happen... ;__;

Also! Keep writing! Hmph!!

[kawaitahana]

You'll find out about that in the next chapter... maybe...

Please wait for the next chapter... I'm still waiting any news from my beta.