ahaha that was a nice read. :) good job, the flow was good. but I want more kisseus ahem wae u no give me kaistal but really though I loved how you interlaced the whole school gossip, school drama... I noticed a few grammar errors here & there but by & large it's fine.
favourite line? I'm afraid I don't have one this time - but I do love the push and pull going on & greasy jongin is always attractive
oh and one last thing - I want a sequel orz the sexual tension was too much to handle gdi why
wait no i already read it no stopping this person rly. OMG THE ENDING Krystal finally gives in ;~;; and yes, like what Tammy said, please do sequel lol /bows down/ awesome read bb girl. ;)
ahhh, I'm glad! I was scared that I might disappoint because i suck at humor and sexual tension and basically everything ;~~~; you're welcome! and aiya, no sequel. i can't write anymore SOBS
I just found this omg ♥ I don't care what you say - everything about this perfect, okay? Anything Kaistal is too amazing for words, tbh. I especially like how Soojung puts up a facade, but Jongin can still see past that. Daaang x)
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good job, the flow was good.
but I want more kisseus ahem wae u no give me kaistal
but really though I loved how you interlaced the whole school gossip, school drama...
I noticed a few grammar errors here & there but by & large it's fine.
favourite line?
I'm afraid I don't have one this time -
but I do love the push and pull going on & greasy jongin is always attractive
oh and one last thing -
I want a sequel orz
the sexual tension was too much to handle gdi why
/signs off and melts in a puddle of kaistal goo
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because kisses aren't my forte D:
I gave up on grammar after 8th grade LOL
greasy jongin makes me want to punch him ngl haha~
aiya, no sequel!!! I can't write sexual tension orz
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OMG THE ENDING Krystal finally gives in ;~;; and yes, like what Tammy said, please do sequel lol
/bows down/ awesome read bb girl. ;)
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nooooooooOOooooOoooooo D:<
d'aaaw, thanks!
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you're welcome! and aiya, no sequel. i can't write anymore SOBS
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i really loved kai in here with the smirks and greasiness and asfdgkjgh ;-;
please write more kaistal in the future! :))
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ah~ maybe~
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