(drop dead) beautiful

Aug 08, 2012 01:14

(drop dead) beautiful
kai/krystal → pg-13, 2139 words
requested by juliette_oh

ooh, boy, you so fine )

male: kai, fandom: exo, fandom: f(x), *type: one-shot, female: krystal, pairing: kai/krystal, -high school!au

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mylika August 8 2012, 10:16:03 UTC
ahaha that was a nice read. :)
good job, the flow was good.
but I want more kisseus ahem wae u no give me kaistal
but really though I loved how you interlaced the whole school gossip, school drama...
I noticed a few grammar errors here & there but by & large it's fine.

favourite line?
I'm afraid I don't have one this time -
but I do love the push and pull going on & greasy jongin is always attractive

oh and one last thing -
I want a sequel orz
the sexual tension was too much to handle gdi why

/signs off and melts in a puddle of kaistal goo

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happymint August 8 2012, 21:53:21 UTC
thank you!
because kisses aren't my forte D:
I gave up on grammar after 8th grade LOL

greasy jongin makes me want to punch him ngl haha~

aiya, no sequel!!! I can't write sexual tension orz

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wintercreamed August 8 2012, 14:55:06 UTC
SPOT for the mean time. I have two exams lmao :))). Will be back after taking them all ^^

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wintercreamed August 8 2012, 15:04:58 UTC
wait no i already read it no stopping this person rly.
OMG THE ENDING Krystal finally gives in ;~;; and yes, like what Tammy said, please do sequel lol
/bows down/ awesome read bb girl. ;)

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happymint August 8 2012, 21:53:57 UTC
LOL elle, waylt?
nooooooooOOooooOoooooo D:<
d'aaaw, thanks!

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happymint August 8 2012, 21:55:26 UTC
ahhh, I'm glad! I was scared that I might disappoint because i suck at humor and sexual tension and basically everything ;~~~;
you're welcome! and aiya, no sequel. i can't write anymore SOBS

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ureshime August 9 2012, 03:17:58 UTC
omg this was amazing
i really loved kai in here with the smirks and greasiness and asfdgkjgh ;-;
please write more kaistal in the future! :))

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happymint August 9 2012, 05:15:11 UTC
thank you!
ah~ maybe~

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kurdoodle August 16 2012, 04:53:42 UTC
I just found this omg ♥ I don't care what you say - everything about this perfect, okay? Anything Kaistal is too amazing for words, tbh. I especially like how Soojung puts up a facade, but Jongin can still see past that. Daaang x)

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happymint August 16 2012, 22:53:05 UTC
crying, thank you so much bby ;~~~~; ♥

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