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kawaii_tenshi27

McFly AU Extras

Sep 19, 2008 02:34

Apparently, when I barely sleep one night, don't sleep at all then next night, and then fall asleep just after 5pm, I wake up at awful hours and can't fall back asleep again, so I start poking through my word files.

So, is it ok to have 'deleted scenes' for something I haven't even finished yet? I'm having trouble wrapping my brain around the idea.

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extra, ramble, character: tom fletcher, fanfiction, cut scene, character: dougie poynter, fandom: mcfly, au

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closercloser September 19 2008, 15:13:48 UTC

I love (though not literally) how Dougie is worried about falling and smashing his head on the tub, and then goes on to attempted death by shower curtain. Jeez. Clearly he is not thinking straight. Poor baby.

Tom gives Dougie hugs now?

kawaii_tenshi27 September 20 2008, 07:07:18 UTC

It didn't occur to me how ironic that was until after I'd written it. I then proceeded to crack up. And then my dad wanted to know why I was laughing. That was a fun conversation. "Well, Dad, I just think it's amusing that it only just occured to me that a suicidal guy in the midst of his second attempt would be worried about slipping and killing himself." Thing is, when I was writing, I was just thinking in terms of instinct. And, frankly, hanging isn't nearly as messy as bashing your skull in on a tub, so... I don't know. He really isn't thinking straight.

Um. Well. Not exactly...? This isn't actually going to be in the story, thus it being here now. But. Um. I don't think there's going to be a lot of hugging after this point, until maybe the end. In that 'don't touch him - he might spook' kind of way. I don't know. I'm trying to get the first half of this thing written just now, so I haven't really gotten to that.

closercloser September 20 2008, 07:20:30 UTC

I think this story should have outtakes as well as deleted scenes! Every once in a while someone could forget their lines or crack up because someone is making faces at them from off-camera (or since this is written, from... over in the margins?), and then Tom and Dougie could make out! Or something. Ha. No, don't listen to me, that would be silly.

oh_mumble September 19 2008, 19:31:47 UTC

SRSLY, HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME? I really, really want to read this now.

kawaii_tenshi27 September 20 2008, 06:52:42 UTC

Um, I don't know? But thanks. I think. ::laughs:: It is so, so, so far from being done. So far. It was probably not a good idea to post this, but I would have done something stupid like try to fit it into the story if I hadn't so... yeah. I'm working on it, though. And my other stuff. But this. I kind of need to finish it, for myself if for no other reason, just to prove I can. Which is weird. But, yes.

Sorry for lack of coherence. It's late.

figletofvenice October 4 2008, 15:21:27 UTC

See, this is why it's dumb that I don't actually have this account of yours friended. I'm going to go do that now. Since I MISSED THIS WHAT. EMMA, YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO TELL ME THESE THINGS!

You know how I feel about this AU (in that I looooooooooooove it but want them to be happy in the end!) so. I looooooooove this part too! Poor boys. Their lives are so hard. ♥

kawaii_tenshi27 October 5 2008, 00:35:25 UTC

Um. Well. You didn't tell me you'd posted either? All's fair in love and fic? I don't know. Sorry?

Chocolate Christ. This AU is going to kill me. It really is. I don't think I mind, but. Their lives are hard. I am mean. You like it that way. :P

fifth_colour November 23 2008, 22:14:03 UTC

Okay, you officially made me shed tears.
And I hardly ever cry at fics, so bravo. -claps-
It caught up on me when Dougie felt Tom's tears on his back... god, it was stunning.
You should definitely post more angsty suicidey things like this.
Not that i like the idea of Dougie trying to hang himself... but whatever. You do it so, so well and the emotion was so raw.
Loved it. <333

(And yes, I realise I am commenting on loads of your McFics. I just can't get enough of them. xD}

kawaii_tenshi27 November 28 2008, 09:21:43 UTC

::offers handkerchief:: I'm, um, glad I could make you cry? ::looks confused:: That sounds so weird ( ... )

fifth_colour November 28 2008, 17:12:08 UTC

xD

I understand with the whole schoolwork-taking-over-your-life thing, i suffer from it myself. I have this chaptered McFly fic posted on Mibba that I can't get updated because of school, and I want to get it finished so i can post it here.

I love getting comments Too. ^^ And yeah, LJ tends to do that with me, too. ¬¬