Drabble: Promise

Oct 18, 2011 01:09

Title : Promise

Pairing : Yunho / Changmin

Rating : PG

Genre : Semi-Angst, 531 words

Warning: Unbeta-ed

Author's Note: Well, this was written in my online time on twitter. I missed writing so much, that i wanted to write this so much, though the original idea was taken from the fic that i'm not sure whether i want to continue to write or just leave it ( Read more... )

p: yunho/changmin, fic, drabble

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monologueofrain October 17 2011, 18:28:38 UTC
why do i have the feeling that yunho died....???? T_T so beautifully sad.... the last two lines killed me really.
'I'll bring you my sky!' is just too ... too much for me. love it to death this line :) thanks for sharing, i really felt emotions into this :)

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kawaii_massu October 17 2011, 18:44:27 UTC
Honestly, when i wrote this, the idea of yunho died was never flashed in my mind, but of course i will leave to your imagination about how you will look at the situation. ;D

i'm glad that you liked that line though, because i also think that the line is lovely. <3

thanks for reading. ^^

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buzbean October 17 2011, 23:55:35 UTC
A paper plane as the parting gift, so cute, childhood friends then? I hope Yunho will keep his promise and be together with Changmin soon.

Thanks for sharing

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kawaii_massu October 18 2011, 14:44:55 UTC
:D:D

thanks for reading. ^^

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preciousyunmin October 18 2011, 13:36:07 UTC
it was written so good T____T am i the only one who cried while reading this one?? this is so sad onnie T___T
so sad .. T__T

Dear God please just make my onnie write another story please??

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kawaii_massu October 18 2011, 14:49:00 UTC
Omooo.. Abi.. please don't cry, dear. and i'm really sorry for making you cried. i'm such a bad unnie. T^T

anyway, thank you so much for reading this, honey. and i hope you enjoy it while reading. >"<

p.s: i hope i'll be able to write another story too.. you too, bb.. i want to read yours as well. *hugs*

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trish3815 October 18 2011, 18:29:54 UTC
This made me happy and sad... happy that they were childhood friends then sad because he had to leave him...
"One day, I'll bring you my sky, Changmin-ah." so much love that he has for him.... as big as the sky!!!

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kawaii_massu October 20 2011, 14:31:23 UTC
I think Yunho just loved Changmin so much that he's willing to give changmin everything.

thank you for reading, dear. Glad you liked it. ^^

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msamplified11 October 19 2011, 13:14:53 UTC
"One day, I'll bring you my sky, Changmin-ah."

I am gonna give u a hug (and maybe some cookies) for that line, cause it's damn beautiful. Bittersweet and I think there's something fragile and heartwarming about the idea of a paper plane as a parting gift, speaks of Yunho's love. Nice one, hun! =)

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kawaii_massu October 20 2011, 14:34:33 UTC
Thanks for the hug (and also for the cookies). *hugs you back* ;D

i'm really glad that you liked that line. it's my favorite line too. Thank you for reading.

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