Comments | katznhund: Amongst the Pale Starlight: Garrus' Canon

katznhund

Amongst the Pale Starlight: Garrus' Canon

Apr 11, 2012 22:16

Title: Amongst the Pale Starlight: Garrus' Canon
Rating: PG
Word Count: 935
Characters: Shepard and Garrus
Pairings: Previous Shepard/Kaidan, eventual Shepard/Garrus
Summary: Garrus makes time one night to talk to Shepard. Innuendos are accidentally made.

( Garrus was sitting at the back of the mess area going over schematics. It was quiet, only the skeleton night crew was awake and he was alone. )

garrus, fanfic, f!shepard, starlight, me2

Comments 9

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katznhund April 12 2012, 17:22:49 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad the relationship hints came through. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

joasakura April 12 2012, 14:55:58 UTC

oh, this was great - the shared history, the innuendo. Garrus' concern for shep.. <3

katznhund April 12 2012, 17:23:39 UTC

Glad you liked it. These two are besties first so I was hoping some of that came through in their conversation.

tehjai April 12 2012, 14:59:57 UTC

*chinhands*

I am really enjoying the dialogue here; it flows well, stays in-character, and is amusing, too. :3

katznhund April 12 2012, 17:24:33 UTC

Thanks. I was worried that the dialog moved around too much with their view points. Glad you liked it.

kyuusei April 12 2012, 18:01:15 UTC

Haha, this made me chuckle. 'Show me your cannon!'

katznhund April 12 2012, 21:09:38 UTC

In my world Garrus isn't the only one who's skilled at making unintentionally inappropriate comments. I imagine it becomes a bit of a running joke between them. Glad it made it chuckle.

bean_bunny April 13 2012, 05:02:07 UTC

Holy crud, you captured what I imagine a lot of their relationship is, late night talks and good friendship sort of stuff first and foremost.

get out of my head what is this

katznhund April 14 2012, 01:39:49 UTC

Good to know someone else shares my head canon. Shepard and Vakarian: partners in crime and the bedroom.