Look who's back from the dead! A lot has happened recently (i.e. I'm out of school YAY but out of work BOO) but I have more time and less stress. I decided to stretch the writing muscles with a fanfic, albeit from an obscure fandom. Hopefully this'll get me confident enough to start back on my original fiction
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let's start with your writing. that first sentence just caught me, the way it was worded as well as the way it introduced the whole scene. i love fic that just throws you right into the story and makes you learn what's going on as you go. i also appreciate little details like the insight into yuuta's family/childhood and the elaboration on how much he loves his club.
btw i am one of those fangirls so i will probably unnecessarily point out any and all captain/wataru subtext, i am warning you in advance. ;) the line where their eyes met was very pointed to me because they shared a multitude of looks like that in the series. and the way he was introduced by yuuta's narrative, the t-shirts with the problems he brought with him was a nice splash of humor along ( ... )
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I really enjoy reading what people may or may not like in the writing, so it helps me figure out what I'm doing right or wrong. This is actually my first time posting my writing in years and I was thinking that it'd be a little boring so I was very nervous!
And lolz, I totally invite you to be one of those fangirls here! Like I said, some of the "subtext" will probably be intentional, and some of it might not. So feel free to point out what you notice because I find the interpretations of others to be very enlightening~
Anyhow, thanks for reading! I hope I can make the ride enjoyable! :D
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And also, you should consider posting this on Fanfiction.net! It's a great place to share multiple-chapter-stories! (And you might find a lot of people who enjoy Tumbling there too!)
Either way, ganbatte! =D
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