You're kinda writing yourself into Gokudera's place. Just like how I kinda wrote myself into Ipin's place on accident. It's good, but for some reason, I feel as if Gokudera would still be swearing a whole lot more than he is. And I agree. Yamamoto... IS AN IDIOT. If I were Gokudera, I would've punched his guts out. XDDD
That's better! XD I still can't believe that Gokudera doesn't say "fuck" as much in the manga... huh. I figured that he'd say it as if it was the only swear word he knows...
There are a few Japanese phrases that are really obviously "fuck" or "fuck you," but Amano doesn't use them as much but scanlators just infer a character's angry level XDDDD
I really, really loved that. Just...I feel like you've captured both of them, and I liked how you dealt with Yamamoto's realization that hey, we aren't playing a game after all (one can only be that dense for so long XD). I'm looking forward to more!
he said, still trying to take the situation lightly when everything around him was collapsing in his mind I love this line for some reason. :D I think it's mainly because that's something Yama would do/say and it's so in character and <3.
The entire fic is really great and I think it's one of the first times Hayato doesn't swear in Italian. Lol. XD;
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It's good, but for some reason, I feel as if Gokudera would still be swearing a whole lot more than he is. And I agree. Yamamoto... IS AN IDIOT. If I were Gokudera, I would've punched his guts out. XDDD
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...PARTY@MYHOUSE
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Yay for nonsensical fluff!
[well I guess it's fluff, even if Gokudera isn't really...fluffy XD]
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Your icon is win! Where did you get it?
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>.> .... <.
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And hello! Do I know you?
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No, I don't think so.
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I read your DA journal, and thought I'd pay a visit.
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The entire fic is really great and I think it's one of the first times Hayato doesn't swear in Italian. Lol. XD;
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The only Italian swears I know are merda and fongul...XD
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