Another Drabbly Drabble

Jan 09, 2008 15:48



Alright, another drabble for the

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100moods, hitman reborn, fanfiction

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soghunx January 10 2008, 01:16:00 UTC
You're kinda writing yourself into Gokudera's place. Just like how I kinda wrote myself into Ipin's place on accident.
It's good, but for some reason, I feel as if Gokudera would still be swearing a whole lot more than he is. And I agree. Yamamoto... IS AN IDIOT. If I were Gokudera, I would've punched his guts out. XDDD

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katsumeragi January 10 2008, 04:45:25 UTC
Fixed.

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soghunx January 10 2008, 14:56:45 UTC
That's better! XD I still can't believe that Gokudera doesn't say "fuck" as much in the manga... huh. I figured that he'd say it as if it was the only swear word he knows...

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 00:23:17 UTC
There are a few Japanese phrases that are really obviously "fuck" or "fuck you," but Amano doesn't use them as much but scanlators just infer a character's angry level XDDDD

...PARTY@MYHOUSE

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youkoyuri January 10 2008, 06:33:19 UTC
Aw! That was absolutely adorable! And it was so well written, I could totally see it happening. Thank you so much for this. Much love to you! <3

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 00:21:55 UTC
Thank you :3
Yay for nonsensical fluff!
[well I guess it's fluff, even if Gokudera isn't really...fluffy XD]

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youkoyuri January 11 2008, 01:23:20 UTC
Well, Gokudera is being fluffy in his own...special...way. :P

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 02:01:29 UTC
Yup ^^
Your icon is win! Where did you get it?

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kidouche January 10 2008, 15:37:56 UTC
I really, really loved that. Just...I feel like you've captured both of them, and I liked how you dealt with Yamamoto's realization that hey, we aren't playing a game after all (one can only be that dense for so long XD). I'm looking forward to more!

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katsumeragi January 10 2008, 22:55:55 UTC
Thank you! It was actually kind of hard for how dense to make him XDDDD

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soghunx January 11 2008, 02:44:44 UTC
"For someone so asininely stupid, he is incredibly hard to write for."

>.> .... <.

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 03:27:38 UTC
Just like Rockwell, huh?

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paupu_lov3 January 11 2008, 01:01:29 UTC
katsumeragi January 11 2008, 01:59:33 UTC
Thank you.
And hello! Do I know you?

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paupu_lov3 January 11 2008, 02:06:04 UTC
D:
No, I don't think so.
._.;;

I read your DA journal, and thought I'd pay a visit.

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 02:08:51 UTC
Oh. Okay! Hi!

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aiuta January 11 2008, 16:36:41 UTC
he said, still trying to take the situation lightly when everything around him was collapsing in his mind I love this line for some reason. :D I think it's mainly because that's something Yama would do/say and it's so in character and <3.

The entire fic is really great and I think it's one of the first times Hayato doesn't swear in Italian. Lol. XD;

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katsumeragi January 11 2008, 23:21:44 UTC
Haha, thank you! Yama is so hard to get in character for because he's just so...simple!
The only Italian swears I know are merda and fongul...XD

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