New SGA Fic: In The Blink of An Eye (2/3)

[katstale]

Title: In The Blink of An Eye
Author: katstale
Words: 17520
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Rodney volunteers John to assist the locals in order to gain access to an Ancient structure. Unfortunately, things don't go quite according to plan. (ShepWhump, RodneyWump, All-around Angst)

Notes: First and foremost, I must apologize to everybetty for the long delay in posting this

Comments

[alasse_fae]

Love Ronon continually scaring Rodney ;))

Poke me when you are on I have a couple icons for you but not your addy here on Chuck.

[katstale]

*giggles* Thought you might enjoy that part--thanks!

Ooooooo shiny! Going over to sign in now. :D

[jackfan2]

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!

Loved how Ronon's ferocity with the Malarians scard the beejeezus outa Rodney, loved how after Ronon made clear he wasn't threatening with regard to Teyla, how Rodney stepped around the Setedan to make known his own threats/promises with regard to Sheppard. Then, how Rodney offered himself up as the reponsible party for the craft crashing and took the poisoned arrow for it. WOW. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time!!

Then.. ooh, poor Rodney and the drug induced dream of snakes and how Carson thought he was talking about the cathetar and the Rodney-angst over Sheppard getting hurt. *hugs Rodney*.

Just.. *hugs chapter, hugs Elizabeth and Carson too* I dislike what's become of SGA since getting rid of Carson and Elizabeth. Seriously. I'm only reading fics based on seasons 1-3, pre Sunday, and that's it. I've not heart for Keller and Carter.

[katstale]

Aw! I'm so sorry to hear that you aren't enjoying the show anymore. :( I'm glad if I could help provide a little of what you've lost in my story. :)

Wow, I swear I'm blushing like crazy here after reading your comments. :D I do so LOVE writing action/adventure, so saying you were on the edge of your seat was just the ultimate compliment for me.

And I was *still* grinning after your comments yesterday when I read this--I swear, I don't know that I'll ever stop smiling now! :D

[everybetty]

The hallucinations were very well described, and you obviously have a great deal of love for McKay. You write his voice as well as the writers of the show do. His little floaty head, clear snake babbling was very funny.

[katstale]

Wow, thank you very much! :)

I like the Sheppard/McKay friendship dynamic very much and I do like Rodney, but oddly enough he's not my favorite character by far. He just sort of...took over the fic on me here, lol. And I couldn't really figure out a way around him, so I ended up just leaving it as it was.