The changes

Jun 22, 2018 07:50

I think that is the most interesting thing in my life - to change myself. It sounds totally crappy, like I am one of these hipster-yoga pseudo-enlightened idiot ( Read more... )

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morskoy_anemon June 23 2018, 18:02:26 UTC
Dear friend!

Your english is very good but several mistakes ;) In your first sentence word order looks more russian than English. The sentence sould look like *Changing myself is the most interesting thing in my life* For more, just one another note - word *but* is never put in the beginning :)

Hope you won;t get cross

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