Holiday Drabbly Bits: Happy Holidays to RUBYNYE!

Dec 13, 2011 09:49

Title: To Bring Home the Light
Author: katmarajade
Written for: rubynye
Pairing: Sulu/Chekov/Gaila
Rating: R
Word Count: 567
Prompt: naked, happy, together
Summary: Hikaru's his light. Gaila's his warmth. It's Pavel's job to make sure they come home.
Notes: Only for you, bb, would I try my hand at a threesome. *blows kisses* It's a touch angsty to start, but ( Read more... )

char: st: hikaru sulu, fic, fandom: star trek: aos/tos, holiday drabbly bits!, hdb 2011, char: st: gaila, char: st: pavel chekov, st: chekov/gaila/sulu

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tree00faery January 5 2012, 21:43:40 UTC
For a first time writing a threesome, I think you did quite well! It's lovely and sweet and natural.

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katmarajade January 7 2012, 16:09:39 UTC
Thank you! Threesomes, especially established, are so much more complicated because you have to come up with a believable relationship for A-B, A-C, B-C, and A-B-C. Else the whole thing falls apart. I love S/C so much that they were easy, but I struggled to make sure that Gaila was absolutely integral here, to both of them, in slightly different ways. So I am especially glad that it seemed natural. Thank you!

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