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katmarajade

Season's Greetings, RAGDOLL!

Dec 17, 2013 07:47

Title: Icy Rendezvous
Author: katmarajade
Written for: ragdoll
Pairing: Charlie/Luna
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 688
Prompt: snowdrifts and icicles
Summary: Molly keeps trying to fix Charlie up with nice girls, not knowing that he's already found the perfect woman.

( There was no question that he loved his mum dearly-she was a fiercely devoted, loving, and amazing woman and the best mother a bloke could ask for-but she also drove him around the bloody bend. )

fandom: harry potter, hdb 2013, hp: charlie/luna, holiday drabbly bits!, char: hp: charlie weasley, fic, char: hp: luna lovegood

Comments 6

thimble_kiss December 17 2013, 20:43:39 UTC

This is so romantic and lovely! I love that you've used their mutual love of the natural world as common ground between them. And they're both free spirits in their way, another reason this pairing works for me. I don't think Molly is going to be offended too long before she starts being delighted.

Moments later he Apparated to a quiet field where the snow had been teased into peaks, valleys, and teetering crests by whimsical winter winds. The artist wind, bored with its sculptures, now played with the long, wavering icicles hanging from the sagging willow branches, playing them like wind chimes, a low, bittersweet winter song.

That is such pretty writing. ♥

katmarajade January 1 2014, 15:24:14 UTC

Thank you so much! I had never really thought about them together until I tried this, but you're right. They have more in common than I'd thought! At first I had meant her to be his boss at the zoo, which perhaps she still is. But then this sidetracked me and I loved the earthy imagery I got to play with. Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm happy with this one!

secretsolitaire December 24 2013, 01:31:59 UTC

Mmmm, this is gorgeous.

katmarajade January 1 2014, 15:25:36 UTC

Thanks so much! I really loved writing this one and I'm happy with some of the tricky sentences that I wrangled into shape.

ragdoll December 24 2013, 23:10:20 UTC

SQUEE! I absolutely love this! It's so sweet, and sexy, and I love how poor Charlie is being badgered by his mum, and being put through sheer torture, and yet there's Luna waiting for him at the end. Thank you so much, sweetheart!!!!

katmarajade January 1 2014, 15:28:46 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I'd never tried this pair before but they came together really easily once I tried! Both so earthy and natural in different ways. And apparently badgering!Molly is a theme in my stories this year. Haha! But she meddles because she cares. But I'm glad Charlie, as usual, found his own path.