Merry Christmas, BLUEMERMAID!

Dec 10, 2013 06:54

Title: Something in the Air
Author: katmarajade
Written for: bluemermaid
Pairing: Zacharias/Marietta, side Angelina/Alicia
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1214
Prompt: snowflakes in your hair
Summary: The first snow brings more than Zach ever expected.
Notes: This wound up being more Zacharias character development than actual pairing, but I can't bring myself to be sorry, ( Read more... )

hdb 2013, fic, char: hp: marietta edgecombe, coffee coffee coffee, fandom: harry potter, holiday drabbly bits!, char: hp: zacharias smith, hp: marietta/zacharias

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thimble_kiss December 10 2013, 14:19:26 UTC
Aw, Second Cup bonus fic! I love this Zach, definitely recognisable as canon's grousing sceptic with a chip on his shoulder, but still with his human credentials firmly in place. His adoration for Marietta being one of them. :) This was wonderful, sweet and happy, perfect holiday fic! ♥ (And I loved that the scarf has been what made Marietta decide he was the one!)

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katmarajade December 11 2013, 22:01:35 UTC
I love Zach too and that's all your fault! He's fun to write and I can really empathize with him. (I'd be a little put off by the Gryffindor zealots and cause fighters too. I prefer evidence and logical discussion to rousing speeches and peer pressure.) Plus, I wanted a chance to branch off from Second Cup and explore some of the side characters. There's just so much more of that story in my head. I love that this leads right into the original fic and imagine Zach bringing Dudley home within a few days of this happening.

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thimble_kiss December 12 2013, 20:40:05 UTC
and that's all your fault!

Haha, I'm like Japanese water torture with the Zach obsession! Eventually I get to everyone... or those of an impressionable nature, anyway. ;D

I loved Second Cup and yes I noticed that this leads right up to that story. :) Which made me love this even more! If there's more Second Cup spillover in your head I'd always love to read.

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bluemermaid December 11 2013, 17:20:35 UTC
Oh, Merlin, you did this on purpose, didn't you? I'm halfway to crying right now.

I love this pairing and I love this Zach. You captured him exactly the way I see him, this gruff, cynical guy who turns into a happy ball of fluff around his Marietta. I love that he followed her around "like a puppy" for a year and I love that it was his scarf that won her over. I love Angelina's badass attitude. I love Marietta's "hair glimmering under the street lights and sparkling with snow," such a pretty image and pretty much exactly what I'd imagined when I left the prompt.

AND NOW, OF COURSE, THE PREGNANCY. Stepping close, she snugged her arms around his waist. Looking up at him, she whispered, "I'm pregnant."This brought me RIGHT to my own moment with my husband, because I did that exact same thing when I told him the news. So I got all teary with happiness, of course. I can't say I know what the characters' struggle was like because I was extremely blessed to conceive early, but the joy in them when Zach spins her around and kisses ( ... )

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katmarajade December 11 2013, 22:09:50 UTC
HAHAHA! I totally did it on purpose. SUCCESS! I'm so pleased you liked it and I'm delighted by your amazing comments. *preens and blushes*

I love writing gruff, cynical Zach, so this was a treat! Z/M are actually pregnant during Second Cup so I decided to play off of that and write this story, which plays perfectly as a prequel to the Dudley-centric fic. [Not really a spoiler-- Dudley is the one Zach hires! Also without an interview. :) And there is a lot of Angie in the fic. Though I didn't manage to fit in as much Zach and Marietta as originally planned, they play an important role.]

I just really wanted to write you pregnancy fic, and as I have no personal experience in that myself, I'm glad I succeeded! I'm so so glad you liked it, as I was quite pleased with it myself.

I think you'll enjoy Second Cup too, but don't feel pressured to read it! Just whenever you have time. That was my only hesitation with this fic. I didn't think you'd read the other one, but my muse insisted on writing this story ... But I think it holds up ( ... )

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shygryf December 13 2013, 21:37:35 UTC
I Love these characters and this fic *hugs*

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katmarajade December 15 2013, 16:26:52 UTC
*hugs back* I love them, too! Glad I'm not the only one!

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secretsolitaire December 21 2013, 17:51:03 UTC
Aw, sweet. :)

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katmarajade December 22 2013, 16:16:45 UTC
*beams* Thanks, bb!

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