Comments | katiepult: X-Men: A Diamond in the Rough

katiepult

X-Men: A Diamond in the Rough - Chapter 6

Jul 16, 2010 00:07

Title: A Diamond in the Rough
Author: Silk
Fandom/Pairing: AU X-Men (Comic-verse), Emma Frost/OC Femslash
Disclaimers: Marvel & its characters aren't mine. The Original Character is mine however. I don't usually approve of disclaimers. Since books don't have them why should I? Anyone who is familiar with the Marvel-verse knows there are many alternate ( Read more... )

x-men, femslash, diamond, fanfic

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katiepult July 16 2010, 15:56:07 UTC

I'm getting a bit of a kick writing Jean/Emma myself. Far more fun than how others write the two :) as for her genetics, that should be cleared up a bit in ch. 8... I hope. My problem is that my chapters end up being far longer than I supposed when I write the outline... So I end up pushing parts further back.

Anyways, Ty for replying. Tune in next Friday for ch. 7!

wkgreen July 16 2010, 14:55:25 UTC

Fascinating. :) I am really liking how you are developing Angela.

Waiting for more. :)

katiepult July 16 2010, 15:57:53 UTC

I'm ambivalent about Angela myself right now, only because she's so darn damaged and has said maybe 3 sentences. Lol thankfully, I know what will happen in the future :) thanks for commenting!

wkgreen July 16 2010, 20:45:57 UTC

That is why I like her. :) You are portraying her damage very well. :)

blackgrl71 July 16 2010, 16:31:04 UTC

i absolutely LOVE this fic! there's not nearly enough femslash fics starring Emma and i totally love Angela. you really capture her emotional development and the growing connection to her new friends. i'm looking forward towards seeing how she evolves. well done!

katiepult July 16 2010, 17:02:58 UTC

I completely agree about there needing to be more Emma femslash out there. In fact I'd love more x-woman femslash period! Especially epic length.

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Cheers!

xenasgab July 17 2010, 00:01:59 UTC

Warren alert!
What a pain in the ass that guy is.

katiepult July 17 2010, 03:50:15 UTC

Now, now let's remember this is an AU :P hehe. Warren might be worse! Or better. It could happen! :D

nike_ravus July 17 2010, 01:33:53 UTC

'one of her fathers'?

Does Warren have a gay MPreg lovechild... with Kurt? :D

It is hard to develop a character when they bleed damage and stolen memories. But we know she has seen a cat!

I'll be interested in seeing how her training for being a hound impacts her actions when she gets out of the medlab. She is very submissive. That first scene with her curling into her Master's lap was (possibly unintentionally) hot. (I would have been down with wild AU with slave Emma and her human mistress. Plot bunnies, they are everywhere.) I'd like to see how you plan to explore that submissive quality and how everyone else deals with it too. Right now it doesn't seem like something that will go away, so her finding a dynamic where she can interact with free mutants will be a intriguing struggle.

mayireadtoday July 17 2010, 01:51:58 UTC

So you're thinking Slave!Emma and Mistress!Emily? Cool. I'm sure Fake Empire!Emily would find that hilarious.

katiepult July 17 2010, 03:46:05 UTC

Heh. Chapter 8 should explain her parentage, or at least part of it (if it doesn't get pushed back. It's mostly written however). "One of her fathers" is NOT a typo :) And there are other ways too have two male parents in the Marvel universe besides male pregnancy. I'd love to see a flying heavily pregnant Warren though. That would be hilarious.

You're right, she's very submissive right now, but she's also in a strange place, surrounded by strange people... in other words, the world is topsy turvy for her and a lot of her submissiveness is just due to that.

AWESOME IDEA for the slave Emma/Human Mistress AU. heh. Not in that Genosha though, not the more clinical one Angela comes from. Emma is definately house slave material *evil grin*.

And don't worry, the submissive quality will subside... mostly. ;)