X-Men: A Diamond in the Rough - Chapter 5

[katiepult]

Title: A Diamond in the Rough
Author: Silk
Fandom/Pairing: AU X-Men (Comic-verse), Emma Frost/OC Femslash
Disclaimers: Marvel & its characters aren't mine. The Original Character is mine however. I don't usually approve of disclaimers. Since books don't have them why should I? Anyone who is familiar with the Marvel-verse knows there are many alternate

Comments

[ryoshu]

whoah. who thought touching could be so wicked? lol. I liked the telepathic information dump. makes the story flow smoother. the exchange of powers was unexpected and neat. I am happy n73 has her wings again. makes things more interesting. the jean/emma interaction is cool as well and adds some nice depth to the story. thanks and looking forward to next friday. yeah!

[ryoshu]

additional note. i love the supporting icon avatar you posted with. just noticed the details. sweet!

[katiepult]

thanks :) I just HAD to make a few icons for her.

[wkgreen]

I believe that falls on the heading of.... OOOPS! Heh, that is one way to catch the poor girl up on current events. Hmmm. I wonder what her powers really are.

Waiting for more! :)

[katiepult]

heh. Her powers are...

You'll have to wait :)

[nike_ravus]

Ooh, plottiness! *is intrigued*

[katiepult]

Plot will come out more and more soon, especially when...*whistling*

[mauders]

Just read all five parts. I'm finding this a very intriguing story.

You write a very convincing Emma and I particularly like the way you enrich the writing with relevant x-men backstory. I also like the way you are developing the relationship between Emma and Jean.

Much love for the diamond wings. Very cool.

[katiepult]

Thanks :) I like Emma so her voice comes out pretty clear to me most times. I always thought Jean and Emma would make pretty good friends (compared to everyone else) if it hadn't been for the whole "I'm having psychic sex with your husband" bit.