Comments | katiebugs18: Fic: 'Spiraling Down'

katiebugs18

Fic: 'Spiraling Down'

Jul 05, 2007 23:02

I've been working on this for a while now and I feel I should warn everyone that it deals with some rather uncomfortable situations so if you don't want to read anything like that don't read this. There's a bit more of an explanation under the cut.

Update: Seriously, could I be anymore melodramatic? Probably but that's neither here nor there. I ( Read more... )

bsg fic, kara/lee

Comments 26

lunar47 July 14 2007, 23:44:26 UTC

wow, that was very powerful. It was difficult reading this but so worth it. It think this line just about broke me too:

“Does Sam know what a fraked up cunt you are? Because I do.”

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:07:19 UTC

That particular line was one of the first things I wrote and it just gutted me too. I just couldn't leave it out because I think in so many ways it's appropriate for them. Sam may love Kara but Lee knows and loves Kara despite everything.

Thanks so much for reading. This was really hard fic for me to write let alone post so I'm glad that others were able to read it and at the very least, see what I was trying to do with it.

katiebugs18 July 15 2007, 08:20:16 UTC

OH and I finally got my act together and friended you...only took me 2 months. :-)

lunar47 July 17 2007, 23:20:43 UTC

hee hee, that's okay. :)

soleiltropiques July 30 2007, 22:05:12 UTC

Wow. I've read this more than once and I have to say that
every time, it comes across as both disturbing and very well
done.

And isn't it disturbing that this is so true to these two?

Anyways, that was my somewhat roundabout way of saying 'well done'.

But ouch...

katiebugs18 August 3 2007, 02:02:26 UTC

And isn't it disturbing that this is so true to these two?

It's disturbing and heartbreaking and definitely the place this came from.

Thank you so much for reading and the feedback. I really appreciate it.

boom_queen July 31 2007, 04:58:20 UTC

You have absolutely nailed one of my rock-hard-kinks: angry tormented sex that leads to reconciliation and a hint of fluff.

This just kicks ass.

katiebugs18 August 3 2007, 02:07:54 UTC

This just kicks ass.

OH thank you thank you thank you :bounces:. And yeah...I'm guilty of having that kink too. Good to know I'm not alone. And these two lend themselves to it so easily

vbabe_moon August 6 2007, 07:00:20 UTC

wow that's...wow. frak. awesome. totally awesome.

arielmoondance August 12 2007, 02:17:12 UTC

Uh...
Very dark indeed but you have done a great job with the self hatred they both have and I can totallu see this happening after UB. It's like they need to beat their anger into each other before they can break through the barriers.
I like that they make baby steps at the end and not happily ever after cause they are still going to be frakked up no matter what!
Great and thanks for posting it, I would have chickened out!