Comments | kathy20121: [fic] The Ever-changing Shapes

kathy20121

[fic] The Ever-changing Shapes

Mar 17, 2011 18:35

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke and Uzumaki Naruto
Rating: T
Timeline: Half a year after the beginning of the Fourth Shinobi World War
Warnings: Implied sexual situations
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
Summary: Sasuke is like ice, cold to the touch and it leaves you burning... Naruto's many perceptions of Sasuke.

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anime/manga: naruto, character: uchiha sasuke, character: uzumaki naruto, pairing: sasunaru, fics

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umeyume March 18 2011, 02:07:39 UTC

This was. This was amazing. The pictures your words formed in my head, with snow and porcelain, were simply magic. Congratz, and thank you for this wonderful story.

*goes look for more fics you wrote ASAP*

kathy20121 March 19 2011, 03:23:04 UTC

Thank YOU for reading and leaving a comment, you have no idea how happy your comment's made me. I'm so, so glad that you liked it! =)

reddo27 March 18 2011, 16:11:36 UTC

I'm speachless. Really. Thank God for the keyboard ;)
I don't know how you are doing this but I can FEEL the words you write. You are totally awesome! I wanna hug you! *bounces in place* I'm already your fun but with this you've won my heart ^^
One small thing I caught in the VII part, second sentence: you write "it makes him look like his crying". You meant "he's", didn't you? ;)
Great story and great pairing but I'd rather have Naru on top. Sasuke makes such a cute uke *squeaks*

kathy20121 March 19 2011, 03:31:38 UTC

WOOW! Thanks, thanks so much! You can't imagine the smile on my face when I read your comment! I'm happy you liked it and that you used the word 'awesome' xD
It's true, thanks! I already changed it =)

Hehe, I'm just getting started with this couple, but the Sasuke uke scenario's so appealing that I hope I get inspiration to write it one day =)
Thanks again! =)

reddo27 March 19 2011, 15:01:03 UTC

Oh, and I hope you'll get this inspiration ;) And that you'll get it soon. Can't wait already! I'd gladly die, if that meant reading NaruSasu from under your pen and/or keyboard *grins*

Cute icon, by the way ^^

kathy20121 March 21 2011, 22:31:03 UTC

Wow! Your words make me want to work harder! I hope I don't disappoint! And thanks again!

Aaww, thanks! They're like my Sasunaru v.2, though of course Tsuna's not as passionate about Enma as Naruto is about Sasuke, but well... since the inheritance ceremony they have their very particular Sasunaru wave going on. The last chapter has to be proof of something xD

Yours is HAWT xD

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aquarian_days March 21 2011, 10:39:36 UTC

:( Sad, but lovely. I enjoyed it. :)

kathy20121 March 21 2011, 22:33:29 UTC

Thanks so much for leaving a comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

creepyhole March 21 2011, 11:33:14 UTC

wow, i loved this fic! :3
i hope you write more sasunaru and spread the love of YAOI! <3

kathy20121 March 21 2011, 22:41:12 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm happy you did!

I hope I'm enlightened enough, they're too good to pass them by! =)

creepyhole March 22 2011, 06:55:56 UTC

do you mind if i add you? i mean a good writer should always be added lmao XD

kathy20121 March 22 2011, 18:48:10 UTC

Of course, go ahead! It would be such an honor! Thanks! =)

Good job repanse March 22 2011, 17:53:10 UTC

Wonderful fic really! They're very IC actually....as IC as can be a Sasuke who wants to screw Naruto and not tear him apart with his katana, at least T__T Naruto on the other hand is perfect, we all know by which sword of Sasuke's and in which part of his body he wants to be pierced...lol. Sasuke may be a cute uke in fanworks, but Naruto is desperately uke for him in the manga.

P.S. I just wonder....why fans are so obsessed by Sasuke's skin? I find it funny because he's always described as extremely pale and white, but he's not...that, in fact, would be someone like Sai. It's not about your fic, but something I've been thinking about for a long time and this is the first time I'm reviewing a fic after a while so I took the opportunity...

Re: Good job kathy20121 March 22 2011, 20:22:52 UTC

we all know by which sword of Sasuke's and in which part of his body he wants to be pierced...

That part's just... golden! xD

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment! =) I'`m glad you liked it ^^ and you're so right about Naruto in the manga xD

Hehe, I agree; I think Sasuke's skin is normal white, but when compared to Naruto's tanned skin it can come out as whiter, so I kinda had him compare it to the snow xD, but yeah, Sai meets the description better, but I guess it adds to the dramatism (?) of the description. And don't worry about it, it's a good question xD, thanks for deciding to review this! =)