FIC: [DBSK] Coward

Nov 22, 2010 01:27

Title: Coward
Pairings: Yunho/Junsu, hints of Yoochun/Changmin, ninja!Jaejoong/Junsu
Lenght: One-shot
Rating: PG-13 (for some mild swearing and making-out XD)
Warnings: Un-beta-ed probably some grammar
Genre: Fluff, Comedy
A/N: This a can be read as a stand-alone, but I recommend you to read Stubborn first because this ficcie was supposed to be ( Read more... )

pairing: yunho/junsu, lenght: oneshot, !language: english, rating: pg13, media: fic, genre: comedy/crack, genre: fluff, *fandom: dbsk

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curiousocurious November 22 2010, 01:44:21 UTC
Aaah the clueless manager...XD just when it get to the good part...

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 07:53:19 UTC
Managers are always clueless ;)

Thank you for reading :)

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splashie_xyt November 22 2010, 02:56:39 UTC
Spot for me~~ ^o^

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 07:53:51 UTC
Glad that you're here, Sweetie! <3

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splashie_xyt November 22 2010, 08:36:39 UTC
Finally was able to read it all in one go!~ ^~^

*hug*

I was so in need of fluffy!HoSu! and yours was just, gorgeous. They're all so distinct and funny. xDD I giggled at so many parts. hehe. I love, love, love how wary and awkward Yunho and Junsu were with each other, and how they needed so much counselling from their fellow members to get their minds straight~ er well...you know. xD

ahhh~ and the beautiful, beautiful confession Junsu gave in one breath. He's so cute! >w< I want to squish him~~ And then Yunho's kiss~<33 awwww~ totally romantic and sweet. If only the manager didn't come interrupt, we'd get our HoSu action~ *laughs* And then Yunho bundled Junsu up in his arms~ kekeke. kyaaaa~~ ^o^ too cute~ I loved that bit the most. =]

Oh, and thank-you so much for the dedication, I'm so glad you didn't forget about this! =DD

I feel like rewatching the prank right now. But I see a load of studying staring at me. TAT

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 13:23:31 UTC
*hugs U back*

OMG, Hun this is what I call essay-comment XD Thank you for your kind words and I'm really happy that you liked it and that longer-than-expected!fail!ficc made you smile ^_^V

Writing this was fun and helped me realize some things XD
1. I'm not good with writing angst ><
2. I'll try my best in comedies XD
3. I need to improve my vocabulary XDDDD

And about the manager - don't worry, the third part is meant to be NC-17 ;D

I know how you feel. I had a presentation today (and I'm exhausted). But tommorow I'll probably fail miserably at my korean test because I haven't studied TAT

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weerainbow November 22 2010, 04:22:17 UTC
I read both parts just now and LOVED them!!! Aww I remember poor Junsu when they played that prank on him, poor boy looked worn out by it all!
I love how you incorporated so much of the other three's input into HoSu's situation, how they (esp Jae) "helped" lol and how they kept appearing at interesting moments hehe.
It's so cute how they were both so shy and uncertain to confess to each other...but I'm glad that Junsu finally got enough courage! And wow, they turned up the heat in that room pretty quick!! ;o)
Can't wait to read more!! ♥

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 07:57:49 UTC
Whoa, your comment is long! Like... nicely long XD

Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad that you liked it!

And to be frank - I really love Jae's character, it was so much fun to write that I think I'm getting attached ;D

And I think I'm going to update this with third part sometime soon, probably next weekend, because I have tests ><

Hope to see you there too :D

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huishan12 November 22 2010, 06:21:49 UTC
woah~ first? :D this was a totally cute fic (: please update w/ the last part of the trilogy soon~! <3

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 07:59:24 UTC
Thank you, I'll do my best to not disappoint you with the next update :D

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blueplue_hotaru November 22 2010, 07:34:49 UTC
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kya~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faints*

this is LOVE~
*rereads*

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gotta love the kiss!!!

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 08:02:14 UTC
No, no, no! No fainting Hun!

Thanks and I'm really glad that you liked it!

And yes, the kiss is for you to love (well, basically for me too XD)

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blueplue_hotaru November 22 2010, 08:45:31 UTC
Y^Y
i'm so jealous with the kiss!
OMG! *flails*

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kathlynwolf November 22 2010, 13:14:52 UTC
Why jealousy? XD We should pray that someday we will be able to see this XD

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