Fic: Graduation Day

Apr 18, 2012 00:55

Title: Graduation Day
Rating: T, for mentions of domestic violence
Summery: As she stood on that stage she thought back to how she had come to this point.
Authors note: Written for writerverse challenge #19 "who's that guy". I went to this web page and generated a random character name and description. This drabbel is based on that. Character name: Julie ( Read more... )

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kathiann April 22 2012, 17:31:14 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I started and stopped this story so many times, but I finally got it done and was relatively happy with it. Thanks again for reading.

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ami_ven April 23 2012, 07:00:05 UTC
Very nice! I really love how much character development you've managed to convey in such a short piece.

As a bit of constructive ctiticism, you might want to work on breaking up some of your longer sentences so the story flows more smoothly.

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kathiann April 23 2012, 17:52:50 UTC
Thank you for reading, and thank you for the suggestion. Run on sentences is something that I occasional have issues with and I am working on it. Thanks for the suggestion.

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