Comments | katfix: FIC: When Chemicals Collide (Remus/Sirius

kyasuriin in katfix

FIC: When Chemicals Collide (Remus/Sirius - NC-17)

Dec 14, 2007 21:48

It's been a while, it seems, since I've written these two in something new (besides Collide). Hope you enjoy. This was originally for spacedye_vest as her happy happy birthday present :D

Title: When Chemicals Collide
Rating: NC-17
Summary and/or Prompt: "When Chemicals Collide" was the prompt. The summary is: Remus comes home to a jealous and in denial ( Read more... )

nc-17, r/s

Comments 37

imprinted_soul December 16 2007, 08:48:05 UTC

“This is -“ a gasp “amazing.”

Remus smiles at that before murmuring, “we’re only getting started.”

tee hee, i love it when sirius is more innocent than remus. it makes a great change and yey i liked this a lot!

:)

kyasuriin December 21 2007, 16:57:05 UTC

hee, I'm glad you liked! I also like the idea of Remus showing Sirius 'the ropes'. Often it's Sirius who's more experienced, as you say.

thilia December 16 2007, 10:31:57 UTC

Fantastic :D Loved innocent and jealous Sirius.

kyasuriin December 21 2007, 16:57:29 UTC

thanks so much! I'm glad you liked :D

looooongjacket December 16 2007, 16:00:26 UTC

oh. it's so sweet.

kyasuriin December 21 2007, 16:58:01 UTC

thanks :) I'm glad it came across that way and not the super angst that it starts out as

brighty18 December 16 2007, 20:31:55 UTC

Fantastic! Oh, how I loved that last line, too!

Sirius' hesitancy and shyness was absolutely adorable and you write sex very, very well!

And this was great: “I’ve wanted this for so long,” he whispers into Remus’ ear as he pulls down the zipper and this part is exactly like every fantasy Remus has ever had. Remus steps out of his trousers, his hand on Sirius’ waist for balance and kicks them aside. There is a brief moment when they both glance at each other and the gravity of the situation washes over them in a tidal wave of nervousness and anxiety. As soon as it has come, however, it leaves and Remus is left with a strange sense of comfort.

A very good read!

kyasuriin December 21 2007, 16:59:39 UTC

oh thank you! I wasn't sure about the last line so it's always nice to hear that someone liked it, lol! Oh your comment is lovely, thanks so much :)

carmine_ink December 16 2007, 20:56:55 UTC

It's great to read new fic from you! This was gorgeous. :D

kyasuriin December 21 2007, 17:01:12 UTC

It's lovely to post new fic! I'm so glad you liked :D