Fiction: The turn of the seasons (unfinished)

[kateqp]

This is an unfinished Mary Poppins story in pieces. I may finish it someday, I may not, but there are pieces of it I'm really proud of and posting it doesn't really bother me. In writing terms I was challenging myself to be intensely descriptive in terms of how things are experienced through senses. In storytelling terms the concept was Mary giving

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[diana_hawthorne]

Absolutely loved this - fantastic job!

[stephantom]

Hello. I just had to say what an absolutely beautiful and moving story this is. And yes, very steamy. :) And very sweet, and sad. It's so interesting too, because it's like they knew and loved each other before this time, but didn't really know each other, not intimately, not as human beings going through the dull, everyday toil of life. Anyway, it's wonderful. Wonderful idea and wonderful writing.