In RL Police probably would need more evidence, so I might have to put that down to creative license lol. I wouldn't be so sure even Loki can get himself out of this one lol.
And thank you :) I do promise that I will return to this story when I return home to my computer!
This was so good! Trust Loki to come up with something too clever and trap himself with it...I would have had sympathy for Circe's demise, but being an accomplice with all that he's done so far, she deserves every bit of payday.
You're stories are an utter delight to read- the plot is believable and you have a talent for the word-thing :D I hope you have a great time overseas....but your updates will be missed.
Thank you! And I'm glad I'm not the only one who figures that is such a Loki thing to do. I'm also with you on Circe, especially as this time she has actively helped cover up his crimes.
'A talent for the word-thing', I love it :) Can I quote that on my resume? Thank you for your lovely words and travel well wishes.
Thanks for the update! This was exciting, looking forward to seeing what happens next! Have a nice time overseas, and hope to see more updates as soon as possible! ;-)
The Beakers certainly can keep a plot fast paced lol! Thank you and I promise to return to Strangetown to tell you what happens next when I return home and to the next update :)
I loved the energy in this chapter. You can feel Loki and Circe's awkward, restrained panic throughout the entire piece, and then there's this realistic release with the last picture. Excellent work :D
That's a relief to hear, and thank you, I'm glad those were the emotions that came across, that was exactly how I imagined them to be :) With a good healthy dose of Loki quickly realising he wasn't as clever as he thought he was lol.
I'll tell you what, that was certainly believable enough to have me on the edge of my seat... AGAIN! The way you write it is brilliant, it kind of tricked me into not wanting them to get caught, even though obviously I do. I confused myself! The conversation with the detectives was so tense and as for the concrete - genius! You could hear the facade cracking in Loki's dialogue.
Ooh... 'cracking'. I just did an accidental pun. Facade, cracking, concrete...
Stunning as usual. Can't wait to see if that devious Mr Beaker gets his comeuppance! :O Hope all goes well overseas, have a safe trip :)
It's probably good I'm going on holidays, it'll give the edge of your seat a rest ;) Thank you so much, it's relieving and gratifying to know that the chapter is able to convey tense and emotions. Your comments always leave me so happy :)
I'm cracking up at your pun :D
I do think it's about time some comeuppance was served, or rather, it will be when I come home to my computer and start writing again lol.
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And thank you :) I do promise that I will return to this story when I return home to my computer!
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You're stories are an utter delight to read- the plot is believable and you have a talent for the word-thing :D
I hope you have a great time overseas....but your updates will be missed.
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'A talent for the word-thing', I love it :) Can I quote that on my resume? Thank you for your lovely words and travel well wishes.
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I loved the energy in this chapter. You can feel Loki and Circe's awkward, restrained panic throughout the entire piece, and then there's this realistic release with the last picture. Excellent work :D
Have fun on your trip :)
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Thank you, I'm sure I will!
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Ooh... 'cracking'. I just did an accidental pun. Facade, cracking, concrete...
Stunning as usual. Can't wait to see if that devious Mr Beaker gets his comeuppance! :O Hope all goes well overseas, have a safe trip :)
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I'm cracking up at your pun :D
I do think it's about time some comeuppance was served, or rather, it will be when I come home to my computer and start writing again lol.
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