Comments | katee412: Chapter Nine

katee412

Chapter Nine - Strangetown

Feb 24, 2010 23:20

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beaker, repercussions, strangetown, curious

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pinkthistles February 24 2010, 19:07:36 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaahhhH....Vidcund ...noooooooooo!

In my game I loathe Loki; he's always such a nasty, mean, horrid sim.
Always kicking trashcans over and stealing newspapers.
Mean loathesome Loki.
I love to hate him :D

This story is very enthralling, in a grisly sort of way!

katee412 February 25 2010, 08:11:56 UTC

I know, poor Vidcund, he was just trying to help. Loki will get what's coming to him...eventually.

And thank you, that you find it enthralling is a huge compliment! I must admit, this was grisly for even me, and I was writing it :s

dinuriel February 24 2010, 21:07:25 UTC

O_o

Poor Vidcund :( *shakes angry fists at Loki*

katee412 February 25 2010, 08:13:31 UTC

I know, and that's why the say nice guys finish last :(
But I will pass on your fist shaking!

anuvi February 24 2010, 22:09:42 UTC

Oh! I'm speechles! Oh!

This is the best part yet! I don't want to sound like I'm a sick person or something but this was just so...real or something. So captivating and...well, I just kept thinking like "no, he can't come home NOW!" and "no, he can't really shoot anyone, right!?". Just great! Can't wait how this goes on!!

katee412 February 25 2010, 08:16:09 UTC

You don't sound like a sick person, I mean, after all, I wrote it lol :s

But I must be doing something right if I made you speechless ;) Thank you, and I'll try to have another update with these two soon.

morkmork February 24 2010, 22:44:30 UTC

WOW! I just read through the whole story today and it's amazing! Good job!

katee412 February 25 2010, 08:17:27 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to catch up. I'm very pleased you're enjoying it :)

emmelfish February 25 2010, 09:44:52 UTC

Noooooooooo! Viddy! D: *Cries* Darn you, dastardly Loki!

I was totally on the edge of my seat throughout this. You capture an atmosphere of fear and anxiety ridiculously well! I do hope Circe takes this as the final straw...

katee412 February 25 2010, 11:33:12 UTC

Karma will get Loki, I promise. But thank you, it's really good to hear that the emotions came across as knowing the ending makes it hard for me to judge if it's suspenseful or not lol.

And as to Circe, well, you'd think that would do it, wouldn't you? *Goes back to writing chapter*