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remisims January 15 2010, 07:32:34 UTC
Still..

Yay yay yay yay yay! :P
Hehe!

I love how you've portrayed Darren. Mine is a bit of an alcoholic in ways. The back and forth between Cass and him was really good too. I can only wish him some happiness. :) (Even if temporary ;))

I like how you've made reference to Dina's age compared to Cass'. I just can't see Dina as being older than she is.

Bwehehe, castrate..

Brilliant as always. :)

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katee412 January 15 2010, 09:45:19 UTC
:) Poor Darren, I figured he'd probably want a drink or several after seeing his crush get married. In game he chucked the "i caught you cheating" fit and when the bar maid started swooning over him, well, sometimes this story just writes itself!

And yeah, Dina is 2-3 days younger than Cass (or at least in my merged hood). And yeah, the threat of castration seemed appropriate lol.

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aledstrange January 15 2010, 16:59:34 UTC
The word ‘castrate’ may have been used
ROFL!! ROFL!! Good one!! SO much like something Mary Sue would do and say!

I just finished with PV so far. Is this the last part? or is there more of this hood still to come?? (and How come isn't anyone dead yet!?? XD)

Love your take on all of the characters, and their relationships with each other. The abortion was totally unexpected, and very unseen, imo, and love how you play around with Brandi and Dina's friendship too. Also, I really liked your approach to the twins, very much them, too. And poor Darren, hope he can get over it! :/

Great updates!
Can't wait to know what's next now!! :D

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katee412 January 15 2010, 23:44:44 UTC
In game there was this moment where the two of them were actually just outside the room alone and it just seemed such a Mary-Sue thing to do, I couldn't not include it ;)

Thankyou, I'm glad your enjoying it. I know, how bizarre is it, no one's died yet. Probably because PV wasn't infected with the same non-aging glitch the other hoods were lol.

One more chapter for now and then back to Veronaville! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long :D

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dinuriel January 15 2010, 17:37:40 UTC
Awww, poor Mortimer, having to choose between his wife's labor and his daughter's wedding! Although I can definitely understand Cassandra's pain, especially since it seemed like his decision had already been made by the time he came to talk to her. At least the wedding went smoothly.

LULZ at Mary-Sue threatening to castrate Don if he cheated! And poor Darren--at least he managed to refrain from throwing a huge fit in front of the wedding guests, but still. And Lilith is awesome.

Loving your interpretations of the characters :)

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katee412 January 15 2010, 23:54:42 UTC
Thankyou, these characters are just so fun to write.

I think missing her wedding was the final straw for Cass, but at least she has a good friend in Mary-Sue lol. Darren on the other hand isn't talking to her, poor broken-hearted man. Lilith and Darren get along eerily well, it's probably a good thing I don't have ACR lol.

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katee412 January 18 2010, 07:58:14 UTC
Lilith is absolutely blossoming with the Dreamers, she always appears so happy and her and Darren get along ridiculously well. And as to him being Cassandra's saviour, well, I never say never ; )

I'm so glad your enjoying it and complete lol at you sister, perhaps she was channeling Lilith :D

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