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remisims December 11 2009, 10:41:51 UTC
:)
Innuendo always makes my giggle, no mater how inappropriate. :P I thought that was done well. Hehe!

*Hugs Nervous*

Wonderful update! Now I'm in the mood to write. (Thank you! :P)

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katee412 December 11 2009, 11:11:54 UTC
I just couldn't help my self lol, and I just wrote a happy scene with Nervous in it, but I'll pass on the hug!

Thankyou, and I'm glad I got you in the mood to write, go forth and type :)

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blueskydaze December 11 2009, 16:08:55 UTC
I always like it when there's an update of this story to read. :) Great job, as always!

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katee412 December 13 2009, 07:03:43 UTC
Thankyou for continuing reading and your kind words, there always nice to hear :)

Will try to have another update up soon!

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katee412 December 20 2009, 05:45:38 UTC
Thankyou for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it and that the innuendo wasn't in poor taste lol, I thought it was acceptable and once I thought it, well, how could I not include it?

I'm writing the next installment right now, and while I don't think I'll get any innuendo in this chapter, knowing me, I'm sure I will soon enough ;)

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aledstrange January 8 2010, 14:49:01 UTC
catching up late...

Great update, I liked how you didn't give much info about what happened to the Smiths, it's leaves some place for speculation (and maybe even some hope, being optimistic....)

Also LOOVEED Olive's death scene (not that she died lol), real subtle way of introducing Nervs to his father :P (and yeah, *that* must be *strange* anywhere!)

Can't wait to start reading about PV now!! :D

And glad to know the clones are helpful ;)

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katee412 January 9 2010, 04:29:29 UTC
Catching up late is better than never catching up at all ;)

I like leaving things open to speculation, and after all, optimism is always nice :) And yeah, I never really saw Olive as the subtle type lol.

Hope you enjoy Pleasantview!

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untidyfan April 21 2011, 01:25:14 UTC
I just found the story the other day and I must say, it's AWESOME! I've got to know what's happened to the Smiths, storyline-wise.

I'm a little surprised that Circe allowed Loki back, though. Of course, it makes a very good point about domestic abuse: it can happen to anyone, even people who are smart and know all the statistics and facts about it.

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katee412 April 21 2011, 06:18:11 UTC
Thank you so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it :D The fate of the Smiths is revealed down the line, although, I won't give too much away.

Circe taking back Loki does seem out of character for her, but as you say, it's unfortunately what happens in real life.

Thank you for commenting and I hope you enjoy the rest!

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