Thankyou for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it and that the innuendo wasn't in poor taste lol, I thought it was acceptable and once I thought it, well, how could I not include it?
I'm writing the next installment right now, and while I don't think I'll get any innuendo in this chapter, knowing me, I'm sure I will soon enough ;)
Great update, I liked how you didn't give much info about what happened to the Smiths, it's leaves some place for speculation (and maybe even some hope, being optimistic....)
Also LOOVEED Olive's death scene (not that she died lol), real subtle way of introducing Nervs to his father :P (and yeah, *that* must be *strange* anywhere!)
I just found the story the other day and I must say, it's AWESOME! I've got to know what's happened to the Smiths, storyline-wise.
I'm a little surprised that Circe allowed Loki back, though. Of course, it makes a very good point about domestic abuse: it can happen to anyone, even people who are smart and know all the statistics and facts about it.
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Innuendo always makes my giggle, no mater how inappropriate. :P I thought that was done well. Hehe!
*Hugs Nervous*
Wonderful update! Now I'm in the mood to write. (Thank you! :P)
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Thankyou, and I'm glad I got you in the mood to write, go forth and type :)
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Will try to have another update up soon!
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I'm writing the next installment right now, and while I don't think I'll get any innuendo in this chapter, knowing me, I'm sure I will soon enough ;)
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Great update, I liked how you didn't give much info about what happened to the Smiths, it's leaves some place for speculation (and maybe even some hope, being optimistic....)
Also LOOVEED Olive's death scene (not that she died lol), real subtle way of introducing Nervs to his father :P (and yeah, *that* must be *strange* anywhere!)
Can't wait to start reading about PV now!! :D
And glad to know the clones are helpful ;)
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I like leaving things open to speculation, and after all, optimism is always nice :) And yeah, I never really saw Olive as the subtle type lol.
Hope you enjoy Pleasantview!
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I'm a little surprised that Circe allowed Loki back, though. Of course, it makes a very good point about domestic abuse: it can happen to anyone, even people who are smart and know all the statistics and facts about it.
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Circe taking back Loki does seem out of character for her, but as you say, it's unfortunately what happens in real life.
Thank you for commenting and I hope you enjoy the rest!
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