Yay, update! :D I like Izzy, she seems to be a great kid. Guess a fascination for science runs in the Goth genes. I really hope Tosha and Alexander will be able to have a baby of their own. It's so sad they're having so much trouble. Anyway, great update, I enjoyed it a lot.
She really does, doesn't she! I think she may have to be dressed in red when she grows up ;)
Alex and Tosha's struggle to conceive is heartbreaking for them, and frustrating for me...hopefully they'll have better luck with simblender some medical help!
This story is so wonderful! I love seeing different takes on the premades. Alex makes a great central character, and super villain Dina is just awesome.
Izzy is just precious and so is her relationship to Alex; it's just such a sweet father/daughter bond.
You express Alex and Tosha's heartache over their fertility trouble so well, especially Tosha. She's such a sweet, giving soul that I feel worried for her. I hope the treatments are a success and they can have some more children soon.
Aw, thank you! The different ways the characters can be interpreted is really one of my favourite things about the premades and villain Dina is just SO fun to write :D
And I must admit I have been feeling cautious about how to tackle their fertility issues so thank you for assuring me I've managed to portray what I see as a heartbreaking situation for them. They've both had the baby want for so long, I too very much want to see them have more kids!
I'm glad they were able to talk about their pregnancy problems in the end. I think that probably saved their marriage! Izzy is adorable and I love how you wrote in the appearance of the cow plant. :)
This is perfectly written. I'm out of words, you managed to describe several situations perfectly, whether Tosha's difficulty to connect to Izzy, how solid Alexander and Tosha's couple is, the rampant uneasiness of infertility, and how Izzy is slightly shaping into someone so big she has little to no place for selflessness.
Your characters are alive, literally :) Can't wait for the next chapter !
Wow, your comment means so much to me! The characters are so alive in my head and it's reassuring to know that comes across. Thank you so much for your generous words and I am so inspired to get on to the next chapter now :)
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I like Izzy, she seems to be a great kid. Guess a fascination for science runs in the Goth genes. I really hope Tosha and Alexander will be able to have a baby of their own. It's so sad they're having so much trouble.
Anyway, great update, I enjoyed it a lot.
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Alex and Tosha's struggle to conceive is heartbreaking for them, and frustrating for me...hopefully they'll have better luck with simblender some medical help!
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Izzy is just precious and so is her relationship to Alex; it's just such a sweet father/daughter bond.
You express Alex and Tosha's heartache over their fertility trouble so well, especially Tosha. She's such a sweet, giving soul that I feel worried for her. I hope the treatments are a success and they can have some more children soon.
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And I must admit I have been feeling cautious about how to tackle their fertility issues so thank you for assuring me I've managed to portray what I see as a heartbreaking situation for them. They've both had the baby want for so long, I too very much want to see them have more kids!
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Izzy is certainly a character and I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you so much for reading and commenting :)
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Your characters are alive, literally :)
Can't wait for the next chapter !
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