Chapter Eighteen - Strangetown

[katee412]

Comments

[zx_ta]

can't wait to see Chloe's reaction ;)

[katee412]

Yeah, it might be difficult to keep things casual when they're living together ;)

[morkmork]

so sad Vidcund is dead. :( But it was very interesting to see how the funeral played out and how everyone reacted. I can definitely relate to Pascal behaved.
I think would make a very good mom.
I think I need to catch up on this story. I must have missed some. You did a great job of writing such a delicate topic and the pictures are done wonderfully.

[morkmork]

edit: I can definitely relate to *how pascal behaved

and

edit: Erin would make a very good mom.

Sorry, should have done a better job of re-reading :D

[katee412]

Don't worry, they should just really allow everyone to edit their comments, I need to do it all the time!

Thank you so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read the chapter. While obviously the aftermath of the funeral was sad, it certainly is a time to explore the characters. And I agree, even though Erin doubts it, I have no doubt she will take good care of her nephew.

[miss_essa]

Your writing is beautiful and your pictures are great.
I'm not used to Maxis characters. I love how you depict relationships here. Hope this make sense.

I need to catch up with your story. I will for sure.

[katee412]

Thank you so much and you make perfect sense! It means a lot to me that the relationships between the characters stand alone from their Maxis backgrounds!

If you took the time to catch up I would be absolutely flattered and honoured as there is quiet a few chapters to catch up on now! If you do get around to it, I hope you enjoy it :D

[miss_essa]

I'm all caught up. This was a great entertainment and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

I don't read stories based on Maxis characters (I'm not used with them) but your version is truly amazing. I like everything you've done so far.

I like how you portray Dina and Kaylynn, Don and Cassandra's and Bianca and Kent's relationships. In fact I like your take on all Maxis characters.

Your writing skills are just awesome and I feel honored to be your friend.

[katee412]

Thank you so much for taking the time to catch up! I'm so glad you like how I've portrayed the character's and their relationships, especially as you don't often read about them.

Your kind words mean so much to me, although I don't think I deserve such high praise! But please know I too am honored to have you as my friend :)

[galialady]

I liked Ripp's attitude. He sure showed some maturity but, I don't know if this situation will be easy for him..

Great chapter as always katee! I agree with other comments, you have amazing writing skills :)

Hope you have a nice day!

[katee412]

Ripp is such a difficult character, I think with everything he has been through he would be mature, but he is still young and a romance sim! I'd say more about how this situation will be for him but I wouldn't want to spoil the ending ;)

Thank you so very much Mara, it's lovely comments like yours that make me want to keep writing :D

[budgie_budgie]

This is so good, katee! The casting for this story is just perfect! :) I had a great reading!

[katee412]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it really means a lot to me that you took the time to comment :D