Collide: Chapter 4, part one

Nov 21, 2006 22:43


Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, although this part is more like PG-13.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when he tells ( Read more... )

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momebie November 22 2006, 04:45:34 UTC
Bad relationships? *raises eyebrow*

I love Wilbur!

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kyasuriin November 22 2006, 07:27:55 UTC

'bad' of course, being an understatement :\

aww, I'm glad. and I love your icon for some reason... who's that?

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momebie November 22 2006, 12:08:24 UTC
It's Lucifer from Angel Sanctuary. One of the people in one of the anime comms just posted a decent amount of icons using the pages from the manga. It makes me happy because he's hot, and he's my physical model for one of my characters. Hehe.

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molsymo November 22 2006, 05:11:06 UTC
oh boy, another chapter! there are so many little details you've inserted into the storyline that i wonder about... why sirius is so enthralled by remus, the secrets he's keeping, the story of the throwdown with voldie, his past relationships... can't wait to actually meet james. and i must agree with katilara, wilbur is fabulous.

you always have time to edit later! keep up with the quick chapters!

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kyasuriin November 22 2006, 07:29:15 UTC

see, I have to insert the details now so I remember to unfold them when the time comes, lol, not just to tease you :p

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far - I'm trying not to edit too much as I go and to let go of my anal tendencies, but it's difficult, heh.

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dramaphile November 22 2006, 05:43:00 UTC
I am completely loving this! Your Sirius is fabulously sexy, and I adore how you've really managed to keep their characterizations despite it being AU. I can't wait for more!

When you're finished (or as you post, if you like), you should post this to hp_whatif, the HP AU fic comm, I'm sure the members there would love this too!!

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kyasuriin November 22 2006, 07:32:11 UTC
oh thanks so much! Thanks for the link too, I was wondering if there was an AU comm. out there but was a bit shy to ask. I shall post over there tommorow when I am less sleepy :)

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aquila_star November 22 2006, 06:45:38 UTC
I squeed like a mad woman when I saw you'd updated, adn then again when I saw two parts. *sighs* Lovely.

Sirius really does get his way, doesn't he? Poor Remus has no idea what he's up against. Waiting impatiently for more, as always. *blows you a kiss*

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kyasuriin November 30 2006, 02:16:59 UTC

aww, thanks so much :) & he really does get his way, the sexy devil! *catches kiss & tucks in pocket for rainy day*

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maybeido November 22 2006, 07:55:56 UTC
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TALKING BOOKS. MY ONE TRUE LOVE!

And guuuuuuuh sex <3

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kyasuriin November 30 2006, 02:18:55 UTC

LOL, if I had only known I would have included a talking book much sooner! *grin* glad you're liking it!

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